Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

ha-ha-ha. You may not win this contest but you won a fan with the humor present herein. thanks for writing this small piece of laughter. Good luck. There are so many good pieces, including yours.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2022

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

That is a very well written 50 Word Dribble Flash Fiction. You used very good and detailed words. That is very hard to do with so few words to use. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2022

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

HAHAHA. Fifty-word theme-and-variation on "Whoa! I wonder what the OTHER guy looks like!" Very fun and creative. You've done a super good job with this. I hope you do well in the polls. Thanks for the smile. xo

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2022

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I absolutely loved your story! You described things well (my favorite was "smashed up teeth," though I might have hyphenated "smashed-up," BUT that would have affected the word count, so nevermind).
Thank you for sharing this story here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2022

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent flash story for the contest
with a surprise ending and some good humor.
Of course, if in fact the opponent is dead, there could be consequences.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2022