At Seventy
A wee poem5 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Very cute idea to match with your photo selection. I wonder about the romance between the two - given their ages LOL
Not important for the review, but just a minor edit: a comma should be added after Dirk.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Very cute idea to match with your photo selection. I wonder about the romance between the two - given their ages LOL
Not important for the review, but just a minor edit: a comma should be added after Dirk.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Ciao!
Thanks for the grammar tip
So There should be a comma before and after the name ?
Comment from Erika Seshadri
I love this sweet little 1-9-1 poem. Tortoises are awesome. I have some as pets. Best of luck in the contest. you surely have my vote!!
Have a wonderful day,
Erika
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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I love this sweet little 1-9-1 poem. Tortoises are awesome. I have some as pets. Best of luck in the contest. you surely have my vote!!
Have a wonderful day,
Erika
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Ciao!
I have a friend that has one small one , rescued after an accident on the road , his shell was damaged but the vet was able to fix it with resine.
Thank you for reading my wee poem!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and very neat 1-9-1 poem you have penned about the 70 year old tortoise and the two little ones. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the picture you chose to use. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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This is a very well written and very neat 1-9-1 poem you have penned about the 70 year old tortoise and the two little ones. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the picture you chose to use. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thanks for the detailed review , glad you enjoyed the read!
Take care!
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, this is so adorable! The pictures are stunning and thank you for your author notes! Becoming a dad at 70 is quite an event (lol), I don't know about tortoises, but for a human it would be (ROF).
Excellent imagery, visuals and a stunning presentation. Best of luck in the contest with this gem.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Oh, this is so adorable! The pictures are stunning and thank you for your author notes! Becoming a dad at 70 is quite an event (lol), I don't know about tortoises, but for a human it would be (ROF).
Excellent imagery, visuals and a stunning presentation. Best of luck in the contest with this gem.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Glad that you found my wee poem sweet.
Hopefully, the two offspring grow healthy and one day become parents too. The giant tortoise is on the endangered list.
Keep safe!
Comment from Fleedleflump
This brings new meaning to coming out of one's shell, and with a sprightly young bride, too - the saucy devil! lol, I very much enjoyed this and you've given me a new Wildlife park destination to aim for :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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This brings new meaning to coming out of one's shell, and with a sprightly young bride, too - the saucy devil! lol, I very much enjoyed this and you've given me a new Wildlife park destination to aim for :-)
Mike
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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I had this one laying around for a month ..hopefully, the two offspring are growing healthy..eventually, when you do visit them, I would appreciate it if you shared your thoughts on the encounter.
Stay safe!
