Autumn Bliss
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Comment from BermyBye50
An exceptional entry in the romance poetry contest. Your entry is a spectacular seasonal poem that fully embraces the wonder and beauty of the Fall. Your use of different fonts and colors mimics the awe-inspiring nature of Autumn's magnificent colors.
Cheers,
Eugene
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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An exceptional entry in the romance poetry contest. Your entry is a spectacular seasonal poem that fully embraces the wonder and beauty of the Fall. Your use of different fonts and colors mimics the awe-inspiring nature of Autumn's magnificent colors.
Cheers,
Eugene
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Thank you !
This stellar review is very unexpected..I appreciate the gift and am glad you cherished my wee poem.
Autumn is my all-time favourite season and I m looking forward to the vivid rainbow-hued leaves, the vendemmia and the many sagre.
I wrote this about autumn in my country, no need to review. Ciao!
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
I don't get why shorts are so often contests. Not much written, so there's not much to say. I stay away from entering unless moved upon succinctly as it is not my nature to be brief. As for your choice, it's... enjoyable and flows like a river carrying leaves of fall to the sea. Surely, it's adventurous.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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I don't get why shorts are so often contests. Not much written, so there's not much to say. I stay away from entering unless moved upon succinctly as it is not my nature to be brief. As for your choice, it's... enjoyable and flows like a river carrying leaves of fall to the sea. Surely, it's adventurous.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Actually, my favorite format is 5-7-5 or less.
I see it as a challenge to say something that can impress , touch enrich the reader.
I m still an amateur in this art but if you have time check out Gypsy Blue Rose poetry it s brilliant.
Glad you enjoyed the read , I appreciate the analogy. ( smiles)
Keep safe!
Comment from Frank Malley
"Autumn Bliss" is a good poem that successfully uses the specified word as a poem. With a little rewriting it could've been better, used some more adventurous verbs, and coaxed out a better scansion. Doesn't the last line need another syllable? 'Pink ladies oh so sweet' just flows better, and an innocent romantic poem like this one will usually benefit from a better flow.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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"Autumn Bliss" is a good poem that successfully uses the specified word as a poem. With a little rewriting it could've been better, used some more adventurous verbs, and coaxed out a better scansion. Doesn't the last line need another syllable? 'Pink ladies oh so sweet' just flows better, and an innocent romantic poem like this one will usually benefit from a better flow.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Actually initially I had :
And Pink Ladies so sweet.
I added your suggestion.
I will try to do better the next time.
I know my English vocabulary is limited.
Going to write down all the new verbs I read and put them to good use.
Thanks for the helpful feedback.
Stay safe!
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, good descriptive writing. You have, indeed, described the beauty and glory of autumn. I especially liked:
Autumn is a season of pleasures,
treks full of adventure .
(Crispy clear mornings, warm sunny days, and cool breeze that blow through the night, making sleeping just right.)
Gorgeous photo. I just want to walk right into it. Good rhyming and good use of word list. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Hello author, good descriptive writing. You have, indeed, described the beauty and glory of autumn. I especially liked:
Autumn is a season of pleasures,
treks full of adventure .
(Crispy clear mornings, warm sunny days, and cool breeze that blow through the night, making sleeping just right.)
Gorgeous photo. I just want to walk right into it. Good rhyming and good use of word list. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the lovely review , yes those colours are so inviting, I took my time to find the right pic.
I?m looking forward to those beautiful vivid hues soon!
Keep safe!
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Many times, finding the photo can take 10 times more than writing the poem or the story. Good Luck with the contest. LateBloomer
Comment from Regina Elliott
You've used the words so
magically, dear poet. Autumn
is also my favorite season. I
have such fond nostalgic
Fall memories. I extend my
best wishes for the contest.
Blessings to you. ~
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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You've used the words so
magically, dear poet. Autumn
is also my favorite season. I
have such fond nostalgic
Fall memories. I extend my
best wishes for the contest.
Blessings to you. ~
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Thanks for the kind review, I nearly missed the deadline , thought I had hours still to post.
Good thing I woke up for a pee wee ( biggrin ) and decided to re-read my wee poem.
I already missed a headline last week by error.
Back to sleep now !
Keep safe!
Yes autumn is a wondrous season!
