Kissing
The best part of every day.9 total reviews
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This is so sweet! I love the line: "Smoochy, full lips make it memorable!"
I seem to remember this came in second in the contest?? Congrats.
Take care,
Erika
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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This is so sweet! I love the line: "Smoochy, full lips make it memorable!"
I seem to remember this came in second in the contest?? Congrats.
Take care,
Erika
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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Yes! Thank you for noticing! xo
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Exactly. My sentiments right on the nose. The best form of intimacy, especially for an old fart like me. Some things just don't work anymore but Kissing is always available. Your verse seems to be written for oldies like me anyway.
Very nice.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Exactly. My sentiments right on the nose. The best form of intimacy, especially for an old fart like me. Some things just don't work anymore but Kissing is always available. Your verse seems to be written for oldies like me anyway.
Very nice.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Well, I'm an oldie, too, so that makes sense.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Effective. Picture goes well with it. The one thought I have would be to edit and remove "all these years later" for it makes that line too long in sight and besides, the following line says the same thing. :-)
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Effective. Picture goes well with it. The one thought I have would be to edit and remove "all these years later" for it makes that line too long in sight and besides, the following line says the same thing. :-)
Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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okay
Comment from Write Right Writer
Rachelle...
What a great homage to kissing--something we don't attempt to put into words very often. Your poem captures the essence of this simple, but powerful experience.
Your strong, clear theme is supported and propelled forward by laser-focused content. Well done. Your word choice is exceptionally powerful and engaging (alive, irresistible, memorable, satisfying, intoxicated, tingles). Kudos to you.
Great work, my friend. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Also, your photo and color scheme are awesome.
Blessings...
Curt
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Rachelle...
What a great homage to kissing--something we don't attempt to put into words very often. Your poem captures the essence of this simple, but powerful experience.
Your strong, clear theme is supported and propelled forward by laser-focused content. Well done. Your word choice is exceptionally powerful and engaging (alive, irresistible, memorable, satisfying, intoxicated, tingles). Kudos to you.
Great work, my friend. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Also, your photo and color scheme are awesome.
Blessings...
Curt
Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Wow! What a really nice review to start my day with! Thanks very much, Curt!
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You are welcome. It was my pleasure, Rachelle...
You are most welcome. It was my pleasure and the accolades were well-deserved.
And thank you for following me. I hope you enjoy my work (actually, I hope you are not disappointed with it). I plan to reciprocate in the near future (insert long story for another time about my system for following writers and the commitment I make when doing so).
Happy that my comments on your excellent work brightened your day.
Blessings...
Curt
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
This is an adorable romance acrostic - it speaks of young and new love and the thrills you receive every day. I hope you truly have tingles always.
Good luck in this contest.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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This is an adorable romance acrostic - it speaks of young and new love and the thrills you receive every day. I hope you truly have tingles always.
Good luck in this contest.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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I truly do! (And 23 years in, too!!!)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a well written poem. You do a great job of talking about IT without actually doing so. :) A beautifully written poem that shares the love you feel.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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I thought this was a well written poem. You do a great job of talking about IT without actually doing so. :) A beautifully written poem that shares the love you feel.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Hahaha. And the picture didn't give IT away, either!!
Comment from jessizero
Your acrostic poem was very romantic indeed! I especially like the "I continue to be Intoxicated" line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Your acrostic poem was very romantic indeed! I especially like the "I continue to be Intoxicated" line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thanks for the nice review!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is true. No matter how many years pass, those kisses last a lifetime.
I like the picture you used with this subject. That kiss will keep the fire burning. Even blindfolded, I would know my deceased husband's kiss. No one could ever compare to his. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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This is true. No matter how many years pass, those kisses last a lifetime.
I like the picture you used with this subject. That kiss will keep the fire burning. Even blindfolded, I would know my deceased husband's kiss. No one could ever compare to his. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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I know exactly what you're saying, Carolyn. Thanks for the sweet review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Fleedleflump
When you find the right person, kissing is amazing. My wife and I do the best kisses, and they can always remind us of why we love one another so much. I very much enjoyed your poem.
Mike
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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When you find the right person, kissing is amazing. My wife and I do the best kisses, and they can always remind us of why we love one another so much. I very much enjoyed your poem.
Mike
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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I hear you, Mike. My husband calls kissing "the straw that stirs the drink."
Thanks for the nice review.
