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Kiss

They are special.

4 total reviews 
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao Poet, you have 2 votes now!

I like your word choice for this romance contest.

Smooching looks fun, two tongues swooshing. You kept your kiss light nevertheless I did find your words captivating. The second line is my favourite.

Stay safe!

I like the the colour scheme and the pic enhances your words.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2022

reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
    Thanks!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
    I didn't know two tongues swoosh.
reply by tempeste on 18-Aug-2022
    A french kiss ..I read it in a couple of romance stories ( biggrin).
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
    We usually do not do it that.
reply by tempeste on 18-Aug-2022
    OH,really?

    Who is "WE" ... Americans?

    I thought everyone in love dips his/her tongue into their lover's mouth and then they swoosh. (biggrin)




reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
    My husband and ,I
reply by tempeste on 18-Aug-2022
    Okay.

    Changing subject..I'm looking forward to autumn, my favourite season.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
    Ok
Comment from Gunner Lil
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You hit it just right. A lot said with a very few words. A great photo that you used also.
Gave my first kiss in the first grade
Good luck in the contest.
Thank you.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2022

reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
    Welcome.
Comment from jessizero
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It is romantic that the kisses are all special time after time. You did a great job with the acrostic format. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2022

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
    Thanks
Comment from Fleedleflump
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Mmm, lips sliding across lips, synchronised motion, erogenous dancing while breath tangles, tongues aching to tickle one another, and desperate dance of passion.

Why do I think about these things when I'm on the train? Lol

Mike

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2022

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
    Thanks