Seventy nine
Searching for cattle36 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Well done Willie. A darn good tale my friend, of a man who was tossed by his his and had wanted to be buried up there on the mountain side, with in the climes of the old tree, and he got his wish, sadly frozen to death. Beautifully written Willie, well done, blessings Roy
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Well done Willie. A darn good tale my friend, of a man who was tossed by his his and had wanted to be buried up there on the mountain side, with in the climes of the old tree, and he got his wish, sadly frozen to death. Beautifully written Willie, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Poor Bob.
What a unique poem this is - I love the Western lingo, it sounds so natural and really added to the feel of the place.
Well rhymed and great little story. That last line - terrific!
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Poor Bob.
What a unique poem this is - I love the Western lingo, it sounds so natural and really added to the feel of the place.
Well rhymed and great little story. That last line - terrific!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
Comment from BermyBye50
Willie,
Your poem shows a natural talent for western poetry. I enjoyed the read. You nailed the language and character of western cowboy speech in the creative write.
All the best,
Eugene
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Willie,
Your poem shows a natural talent for western poetry. I enjoyed the read. You nailed the language and character of western cowboy speech in the creative write.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
Comment from jake cosmos aller
great cowboy poem. I am a fan of the style, akin to Hobo poetry also dating from the 30's. Like that you wrote in cursive, brown ink adds a certain flare to it.
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great cowboy poem. I am a fan of the style, akin to Hobo poetry also dating from the 30's. Like that you wrote in cursive, brown ink adds a certain flare to it.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
I love d the cowboy lingo. I have to ask Willie is this a fictional story or did poor Bob really die up there? If wouldn't matter you gave him what he asked for in death and then some. He knew you would. Best JohnC.
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I love d the cowboy lingo. I have to ask Willie is this a fictional story or did poor Bob really die up there? If wouldn't matter you gave him what he asked for in death and then some. He knew you would. Best JohnC.
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Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed this poem story. I can imagine the cowboys going out in a snowstorm to look for cattle and getting trapped by the storm. I can also imagine the remaining cowboy writing this story about how he lost his friend. It is so sad because it seems Bob died in a place he loved with a smile on his face. He was sort of obscessed with death and it seem that this was as it was meant to be. Nicely written.
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I enjoyed this poem story. I can imagine the cowboys going out in a snowstorm to look for cattle and getting trapped by the storm. I can also imagine the remaining cowboy writing this story about how he lost his friend. It is so sad because it seems Bob died in a place he loved with a smile on his face. He was sort of obscessed with death and it seem that this was as it was meant to be. Nicely written.
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Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
