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Comment from JLR
A delightful discourse! With excellent smooth rhythm - melodic, and as a reader passes over quatrain to quatrain, you see the Joy of the Poet's eyes bathed in all things that one loves in life and life!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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A delightful discourse! With excellent smooth rhythm - melodic, and as a reader passes over quatrain to quatrain, you see the Joy of the Poet's eyes bathed in all things that one loves in life and life!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Thanks for this great review, its always appreciated. :)
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was a beautiful poem about things that make you happy. I love that name - Hannah Rose. It is a lovely name. Your poem flowed very well and was easy to read. Best of luck to you in this and all endeavors.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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This was a beautiful poem about things that make you happy. I love that name - Hannah Rose. It is a lovely name. Your poem flowed very well and was easy to read. Best of luck to you in this and all endeavors.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Thank you, that's very kind of you....I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I loved the positivity of this poem. It's nice to read a poem where the author is just appreciative of life and that alone brings happiness. Your poem is well written - share the message so well - great job.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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I loved the positivity of this poem. It's nice to read a poem where the author is just appreciative of life and that alone brings happiness. Your poem is well written - share the message so well - great job.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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Thank you, I feel very blessed by all I have in my life. I really appreciate this terrific review. :)
Comment from Wendy G
I enjoyed your positive attitude and uplifting tone to this poem. It's well written with good rhyming, and fun presentation. You sound like a very contented happy person. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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I enjoyed your positive attitude and uplifting tone to this poem. It's well written with good rhyming, and fun presentation. You sound like a very contented happy person. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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Thank you, I'm really grateful for all I have in life. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
It's so heartwarming that the list of things you're grateful for keeps growing. I hope you never run out of things to list. A new granddaughter must me very exciting! What a blessing! Have a wonderful day!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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It's so heartwarming that the list of things you're grateful for keeps growing. I hope you never run out of things to list. A new granddaughter must me very exciting! What a blessing! Have a wonderful day!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review and your kind words. :)
Comment from Patricia Tiffany Morris
Fun, reflective exercise. I might try this some day. I found the last two lines needed a little more or maybe too abrupt from the rest of the tone of the poem. They are also near rhymes. I think the last full stanza is the perfect place to end.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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Fun, reflective exercise. I might try this some day. I found the last two lines needed a little more or maybe too abrupt from the rest of the tone of the poem. They are also near rhymes. I think the last full stanza is the perfect place to end.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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Thanks for reading.
