Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 69 "Whilst I sleep"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I'm not sure but it sounds like you are describing death here - but maybe I'm reading into it too much. That said, I enjoyed it and read it twice. Wonderful word choices. This flows so well. But most of all it makes you think. Great job.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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I'm not sure but it sounds like you are describing death here - but maybe I'm reading into it too much. That said, I enjoyed it and read it twice. Wonderful word choices. This flows so well. But most of all it makes you think. Great job.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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Michael, thanks
Comment from royowen
I rather like this style of poem Jim, a nocturna poem with a nocturnal theme and connecting middle line rhyme, and your writing is very, very good, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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I rather like this style of poem Jim, a nocturna poem with a nocturnal theme and connecting middle line rhyme, and your writing is very, very good, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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Roy thank you!
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Welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-It sounds like an interesting form.
-A good topic, effective imagery, and rhyme.
-You create a peaceful mood in the first verse.
-Vivid imagery describes the "Flashing, twinkling stars."
-A good concluding verse.
-I liked your poem.
-Very well done!!
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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-It sounds like an interesting form.
-A good topic, effective imagery, and rhyme.
-You create a peaceful mood in the first verse.
-Vivid imagery describes the "Flashing, twinkling stars."
-A good concluding verse.
-I liked your poem.
-Very well done!!
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2022
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Pam perhaps so, I need to revisit this 😒
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You did a good job!!
