Seeking Him
A farmers faith is rewarded.22 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
Love the painting and your words do it justice. Then we come to the message you deliver. Simply sublime. It deserves six stars but I'm all out. A truly inspiring piece.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Love the painting and your words do it justice. Then we come to the message you deliver. Simply sublime. It deserves six stars but I'm all out. A truly inspiring piece.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, Bob, for the great praise of my poem and the virtual 6 stars.
Comment from harmony13
Beautiful Poem! I enjoyed how the author's words led up to seeing the Lord everywhere! I found this poem descriptive and extremely creative. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Beautiful Poem! I enjoyed how the author's words led up to seeing the Lord everywhere! I found this poem descriptive and extremely creative. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, harmony13, for your high praise of my poem.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Beautiful presentation and outstanding imagery of nature and God.
Excellent entry for the Another Rhyming Contest.
I enjoyed reading your poem. I also enjoyed your unique style and well chosen words.
Good presentation Your writing flows and it's easy to understand.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Beautiful presentation and outstanding imagery of nature and God.
Excellent entry for the Another Rhyming Contest.
I enjoyed reading your poem. I also enjoyed your unique style and well chosen words.
Good presentation Your writing flows and it's easy to understand.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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"Your writing flows and it?s easy to understand." Those words are music to my ears, Gypsy. Thank you so much!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
Congratulations on your 750th post!!
That is a tremendous achievement, you should be so proud.
As a new member,
(6 months,) it seems unattainable to have so many posts.
Are they all poetry or do you also write in prose?
This verse is well conceived, realized and presented.
I find it inspirational in a classic way.
The sentiment feels heartfelt and authentic.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Congratulations on your 750th post!!
That is a tremendous achievement, you should be so proud.
As a new member,
(6 months,) it seems unattainable to have so many posts.
Are they all poetry or do you also write in prose?
This verse is well conceived, realized and presented.
I find it inspirational in a classic way.
The sentiment feels heartfelt and authentic.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much, K. L., for this wonderful review of my poem and the congrats. I write both prose and poetry.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, Raul. I am pleased you enjoyed my poem.
Comment from HarryT
I think this poem has wonderful imagery. The rhyme scheme works and provides a peaceful flow, which leads the reader to feel the serene sense cast by the writer. My only problem is the last line, which could be read as God is receiving the reward. Should it not be "our reward"? Yet, overall an excellent write.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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I think this poem has wonderful imagery. The rhyme scheme works and provides a peaceful flow, which leads the reader to feel the serene sense cast by the writer. My only problem is the last line, which could be read as God is receiving the reward. Should it not be "our reward"? Yet, overall an excellent write.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Hi, Harry. I truly appreciate your high praise of the poem?s rhymes and imagery. I can also understand how one can interpret the last line as you did. How about this: His beauty our reward.
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Like the new last line.
Comment from Faith Williams
I like your poem especially the third stanza and most especially the line, 'hot pink He blends with lavender until the heavens blush.' It's lovely imagery. Good luck in the contest, and congratulations on your milestone post!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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I like your poem especially the third stanza and most especially the line, 'hot pink He blends with lavender until the heavens blush.' It's lovely imagery. Good luck in the contest, and congratulations on your milestone post!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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I am delighted you like my poem?s imagery, Faith, and I appreciate your congrats on the milestone.
Comment from zanya
A great sub title for this poem re a farmer's Faith - an interesting angle on life on the farm and what a reward 'A skyward glance I see His hand /at work with paint and brush' wish I had a 6!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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A great sub title for this poem re a farmer's Faith - an interesting angle on life on the farm and what a reward 'A skyward glance I see His hand /at work with paint and brush' wish I had a 6!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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I truly appreciate your endorsement of the subtitle, zanya. Many thanks for the virtual six.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, He's even addressed this in His word, if you seek me you will find, though I am not far, He hides Himself so we can find Him, His very desire is the love of His life will fellowship, and as Adam walked with Him in the cool of the evening in the Garden, that has never changed. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Oh yes indeed, He's even addressed this in His word, if you seek me you will find, though I am not far, He hides Himself so we can find Him, His very desire is the love of His life will fellowship, and as Adam walked with Him in the cool of the evening in the Garden, that has never changed. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your high praise of my poem, Roy.
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Most welcome
Comment from Anne Johnston
Congratulations on this milestone post. Your poem is beautiful, rhyming is great and it sends forth a strong message of how we can see God's hand at work in all the beauties of nature. I hope this does well in the contest
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Congratulations on this milestone post. Your poem is beautiful, rhyming is great and it sends forth a strong message of how we can see God's hand at work in all the beauties of nature. I hope this does well in the contest
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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I truly appreciate your congrats for the milestone, Anne. Honestly, I can?t believe I?ve posted that many works. Many thanks also for your wonderful praise of the poem.
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You are very welcome
