Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I liked your rhyme scheme in this poem. Your content was nice, as well. I am sorry you missed seeing him live. Thanks for sharing this poem, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022

Thank you for this great review, it's so appreciated. :)

Comment from Frank Malley

Good

"The King Still Lives" gives a brief bio of Elvis Presley. It celebrates one of his songs, and praises what his music accomplished in what are often awkward, inverted lines mutilated so they will rhyme. However, this poem does make a functional acknowledgement of a great music artist.

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 Comment Written 20-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022

Thank you.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I think Elvis has survived with his reputation in tact all these years and his voice is heard often as it is smooth as silk and reminds us of love and tenderness. A fine tribute here, much enjoyed, I heard his music as I was reading your wonderful words, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 20-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022

Thank you for reading my poem. I liked Elvis, but was more of a monkees fan at the time. :)