The Ultimate Prize
A life goal to master7 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I see the teacher in you coming through loud and clear in this little poem. Yes, that is the best kind of competition, one that helps us become the best we can be! Congratulations again!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
I see the teacher in you coming through loud and clear in this little poem. Yes, that is the best kind of competition, one that helps us become the best we can be! Congratulations again!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Thank you!! xo
Comment from Jill McCauslin
I like your poem. It's a great comment on competition and the value of always trying to better yourself. The accompanying picture is wonderful; it goes well with the poem. The only change I might suggest is that I found the font choice and colors made it hard for me to read. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
I like your poem. It's a great comment on competition and the value of always trying to better yourself. The accompanying picture is wonderful; it goes well with the poem. The only change I might suggest is that I found the font choice and colors made it hard for me to read. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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I heard that from another reviewer, as well. Lesson learned: simple = better!! Thanks for letting me know your thoughts. Always appreciated.
Comment from Sanku
I liked the picture very much .A cat seeing himself as a tiger! That says a lot about his confidence .I liked the message .You do things to the best of your ability....All the best
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
I liked the picture very much .A cat seeing himself as a tiger! That says a lot about his confidence .I liked the message .You do things to the best of your ability....All the best
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Well, isn't THAT the ultimate to begin my FS day with!! Thank you very much!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a wonderfully uplifting poem that seems to say that you can never disappoint yourself if you don't compare yourself to anyone else. I thought it was well written and well presented with a unique font. Great job.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
What a wonderfully uplifting poem that seems to say that you can never disappoint yourself if you don't compare yourself to anyone else. I thought it was well written and well presented with a unique font. Great job.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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I appreciate these wonderful, generous words. Thank you!
Comment from Regina Elliott
Wonderful philosophy on
us humans in competition.
You've penned this so well.
I try to remember this when I
work hard on a poem, and if
I enter a contest. May you
have a creative week. Good
luck in the contest. ~
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
Wonderful philosophy on
us humans in competition.
You've penned this so well.
I try to remember this when I
work hard on a poem, and if
I enter a contest. May you
have a creative week. Good
luck in the contest. ~
Comment Written 21-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2022
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Oh, I love that well-wish: May you have a creative week! That is so wonderful!! And thank you for the very nice review, as well. xo
Comment from jessizero
I agree that competing with oneself is great. I absolutely love the picture you supplied to accompany this poem. Thanks for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
I agree that competing with oneself is great. I absolutely love the picture you supplied to accompany this poem. Thanks for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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I've always loved it, too. I've also seen it with a male lion looking back.
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This is a fantastic entry for the Competition prompt. It is easy to lose sight that the wisest way to judge if we are "winning" in life or not is to compare our past self to our present self.
Very profound. I hope this does well in the contest.
The only complaint I have is the cursive font is a little harder to read than others--perhaps bump it up one more size to help.
Cheers,
Erika
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
This is a fantastic entry for the Competition prompt. It is easy to lose sight that the wisest way to judge if we are "winning" in life or not is to compare our past self to our present self.
Very profound. I hope this does well in the contest.
The only complaint I have is the cursive font is a little harder to read than others--perhaps bump it up one more size to help.
Cheers,
Erika
Comment Written 20-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
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Okay! Thank you; that is a great suggestion, and I'll do it right now. I appreciate your warm and gracious review.