Finding Freedom
Escaping into a new life...11 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Wow...
I'm smiling.
There is a path forward...
(tap,tap,tap)
I did not see the ending coming!
Great flash!
Congrats on third place...
Karenina
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Wow...
I'm smiling.
There is a path forward...
(tap,tap,tap)
I did not see the ending coming!
Great flash!
Congrats on third place...
Karenina
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent flash fiction story and you expressed the feeling of liberation from a controlling husband very well. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
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An excellent flash fiction story and you expressed the feeling of liberation from a controlling husband very well. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, Finding Freedom, has the required word count and shows the readers one more tale of how one of us got on board with Fanstory.
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This one-hundred-word story, Finding Freedom, has the required word count and shows the readers one more tale of how one of us got on board with Fanstory.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You have presented an excellent flash fiction here. Interesting repetition of the tap, tap, tap words, and a well-built up surprise in the tail. Kate xx
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You have presented an excellent flash fiction here. Interesting repetition of the tap, tap, tap words, and a well-built up surprise in the tail. Kate xx
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, connection even if it's the virtual world is very important to human mental health. I like how you don't even tell us what the "tap, tap, tap" signifies until the very end. Best wishes in the contest!
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Yes, connection even if it's the virtual world is very important to human mental health. I like how you don't even tell us what the "tap, tap, tap" signifies until the very end. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
and here I thought you regain fleet of foot and joined Gregory Hines in Las Vegas. Writing I think, was the better choice for elderly types as I found trying to play basketball falling on my face.
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and here I thought you regain fleet of foot and joined Gregory Hines in Las Vegas. Writing I think, was the better choice for elderly types as I found trying to play basketball falling on my face.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed reading your story. You wrote a piece that built steadily and really paid off at the end. Thank you so much for sharing this story, and best wishes to you.
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I enjoyed reading your story. You wrote a piece that built steadily and really paid off at the end. Thank you so much for sharing this story, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
Comment from royowen
How thrilling! I wrote a poem some years ago called "Cringe", because that's the way it was emotionally, I'd nervously write a poem and then I'd post while cringing inside, one becomes more courageous with time, and people are always kind...apart from the occasional tough one. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
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How thrilling! I wrote a poem some years ago called "Cringe", because that's the way it was emotionally, I'd nervously write a poem and then I'd post while cringing inside, one becomes more courageous with time, and people are always kind...apart from the occasional tough one. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
Comment from LovnPeace
This is terrific. I love the creativity of it and the message it carries. It is a freedom, to be able to express what is important to oneself. It matters not what others think. Blessings, Barbara. Xo
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This is terrific. I love the creativity of it and the message it carries. It is a freedom, to be able to express what is important to oneself. It matters not what others think. Blessings, Barbara. Xo
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
Comment from Fleedleflump
Even though it was clear where we were going with this, it was still an effective story, showing us how a relationship can be imprisoning and how writing can set us free. Beautifully penned.
Mike
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Even though it was clear where we were going with this, it was still an effective story, showing us how a relationship can be imprisoning and how writing can set us free. Beautifully penned.
Mike
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
