In The Scheme of Things
We're all a bit insignificant...7 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Etheree Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation and imagery is nice. Good luck in the contest. You got my vote.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Excellent entry for the Etheree Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation and imagery is nice. Good luck in the contest. You got my vote.
Gypsy
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I always appreciate a great review and a vote! :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Wonderful use of imagery in this beautiful Etheree poem you have penned for the contest. I absolutely love thunder storms. You're right, they can make you feel small in the scheme of things.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Wonderful use of imagery in this beautiful Etheree poem you have penned for the contest. I absolutely love thunder storms. You're right, they can make you feel small in the scheme of things.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked this and that it resonated with you. :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed reading it. Great job with the image and the syllable
count per line. Your message was well stated and true. Line 8
looks awkward being so much longer than the others.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
line 5--pedals--->petals
Rain
falls cool
on dry earth...
Thirsty flowers,
like praying hands,
raise their petals in praise.
God provides for all with love.
Thunder rumbles, lightning flashes
reminding us of how small we are,
in His vast universe that has no end.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed reading it. Great job with the image and the syllable
count per line. Your message was well stated and true. Line 8
looks awkward being so much longer than the others.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
line 5--pedals--->petals
Rain
falls cool
on dry earth...
Thirsty flowers,
like praying hands,
raise their petals in praise.
God provides for all with love.
Thunder rumbles, lightning flashes
reminding us of how small we are,
in His vast universe that has no end.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for the correction, both are appreciated.
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a beautiful ethereal poem from start to finish. I loved the magical artwork with the rain falling on the daisies. A powerful message in these well written lines.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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This is a beautiful ethereal poem from start to finish. I loved the magical artwork with the rain falling on the daisies. A powerful message in these well written lines.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful review and for your insightful comments. :)
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is the best entry thus far I have read in this contest. Your message is clear. The font size is good, but I think the black font is too hard for this poem. I would make the font green like the earth the flowers are planted in. The same color green at the bottom of the fantastic gif visual. Then you would have the earth tones of brown and green. I love your visual. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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This is the best entry thus far I have read in this contest. Your message is clear. The font size is good, but I think the black font is too hard for this poem. I would make the font green like the earth the flowers are planted in. The same color green at the bottom of the fantastic gif visual. Then you would have the earth tones of brown and green. I love your visual. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you for this terrific review, it's always nice to hear from you. :)
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You are welcome. If you are who I think you are. You and your daughter has started me using gifts for my poems too. Goo in my folder and look at the poem "I Feel Misty". It was the best suggestion.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful and beautiful poem. I like your poetry. It is clear and concise. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Interesting. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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I have enjoyed reading your wonderful and beautiful poem. I like your poetry. It is clear and concise. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Interesting. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you, I really appreciate your great comments. :)
Comment from Liz Westfall
We are truly insignificant. In the grand scheme of things, as you put it, we are but those flowers awaiting the rain. This was a very well-written etheree. I love the moving picture, as well.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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We are truly insignificant. In the grand scheme of things, as you put it, we are but those flowers awaiting the rain. This was a very well-written etheree. I love the moving picture, as well.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
