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Comment from Annmuma
Very creative and a nice twist for the contest. Wish I had read it while the voting was still open!!!! The characters are well-defined and the scenes are clearly outlined. Meets all contest parameters and is well-written in every aspect. ann
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Very creative and a nice twist for the contest. Wish I had read it while the voting was still open!!!! The characters are well-defined and the scenes are clearly outlined. Meets all contest parameters and is well-written in every aspect. ann
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for the six stars. It did get a second in the contest...one vote out of first...LOL, Terry.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Sure. That believable. It's Alabama where flirtatious advances flow with the women there as ice does on the Rhine in winter. ............................................................
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Sure. That believable. It's Alabama where flirtatious advances flow with the women there as ice does on the Rhine in winter. ............................................................
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from giraffmang
Wouldn't it be a crying shame if the woman was desperately abused by her husband and this as her one shot at true happiness... lol
Nah, this was a well written piece but I do think the narrator is a bit of an arse as his revenge was against women in general rather than the specific one.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Wouldn't it be a crying shame if the woman was desperately abused by her husband and this as her one shot at true happiness... lol
Nah, this was a well written piece but I do think the narrator is a bit of an arse as his revenge was against women in general rather than the specific one.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from Ann M
Good topic for a flash fiction ....thought you did a great job. Wasn't sure where it was going until the paragraph about the wife... Loved the text.
I think you said this was a contest ...so good luck!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Good topic for a flash fiction ....thought you did a great job. Wasn't sure where it was going until the paragraph about the wife... Loved the text.
I think you said this was a contest ...so good luck!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you for reading, the mystery writer.
Comment from Marienkiefer
This is a terribly charming story. Terrible it played out that way, but charming for the authors-s voice, story and resolution.
I seriously thought I could predict what the ending would be but it turned out differently.
My favourite line in the story: Not any one line. There were many great lines in the story. Great conceptualization and flow, threaded with nice bits of humour.
Very enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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This is a terribly charming story. Terrible it played out that way, but charming for the authors-s voice, story and resolution.
I seriously thought I could predict what the ending would be but it turned out differently.
My favourite line in the story: Not any one line. There were many great lines in the story. Great conceptualization and flow, threaded with nice bits of humour.
Very enjoyable read.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from leather
My mind must be on holiday because I couldn't keep all the calls, blocks, redials, etc. straight. The explanations below the text box, regrettably, didn't help much. I know you tried to clear things up, and I appreciate that, but it didn't help me.
Good effort and no spelling mistakes.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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My mind must be on holiday because I couldn't keep all the calls, blocks, redials, etc. straight. The explanations below the text box, regrettably, didn't help much. I know you tried to clear things up, and I appreciate that, but it didn't help me.
Good effort and no spelling mistakes.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Sorry my writing was so bad and confusing.
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Now...wait a minute. I didn't say your writing was bad--it was just more complicated than my brain could follow.
I think you still have time if you want to change or add anything and are still in edit mode.
I am constantly rewriting things--it's part of writing.
Take care--be positive.
Comment from joann r romei
This was very well done, you managed to create suspense and tension. I have also received misdialed calls such as, how r u since your heart attack, and someone died I did not know. lol nothing this juicy.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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This was very well done, you managed to create suspense and tension. I have also received misdialed calls such as, how r u since your heart attack, and someone died I did not know. lol nothing this juicy.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you for reading!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ha! Ouch! Well, he made a choice, didn't he... Had he called, the woman would have known he wasn't Dudley, so I guess texting her was his way of getting back at his wife... But SHE wasn't his wife, so I hope he knows he had no business impersonating Dudley. (LOL)
Very amusing, and well done.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Ha! Ouch! Well, he made a choice, didn't he... Had he called, the woman would have known he wasn't Dudley, so I guess texting her was his way of getting back at his wife... But SHE wasn't his wife, so I hope he knows he had no business impersonating Dudley. (LOL)
Very amusing, and well done.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you for reading and reviewing.
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It was my pleasure.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is magical, inventive and it made me smile. Your clever story is entertaining and I would have been tempted to lead this girl on a little before the final blow! Ha ha ha, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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This is magical, inventive and it made me smile. Your clever story is entertaining and I would have been tempted to lead this girl on a little before the final blow! Ha ha ha, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Dolly, thank you for the six stars, you are a jewel!
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You are welcome, well deserved x x x
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! This was brilliant! I felt bad for the narrator having to deal with this woman continuing to send messages to the wrong number. Maybe Dudley changed numbers? The ending text was perfect!
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Lol! This was brilliant! I felt bad for the narrator having to deal with this woman continuing to send messages to the wrong number. Maybe Dudley changed numbers? The ending text was perfect!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Helen, thank you for reading and reviewing.
