Things That Make You Go Huh?
Count eleven things that don't seem right28 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Well I got eight things that appears to be wrong: Identical twins being, different, swam alone but three fell up. Well you can't fall up. Little giant man is a contradiction. And the she should be he, and helping four is also wrong.
Now if the tree is supposed to be an error, then I can say then I didn't see it as one as a lonely tree does grow in the middle of the dessert in Bahrain. It's become quite famous as it defies all beliefs. I've been there and seen it.
Fun poem and a fun contests. Good luck! Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Well I got eight things that appears to be wrong: Identical twins being, different, swam alone but three fell up. Well you can't fall up. Little giant man is a contradiction. And the she should be he, and helping four is also wrong.
Now if the tree is supposed to be an error, then I can say then I didn't see it as one as a lonely tree does grow in the middle of the dessert in Bahrain. It's become quite famous as it defies all beliefs. I've been there and seen it.
Fun poem and a fun contests. Good luck! Ulla:)))
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Ulla, thank you so much for having a little fun with me. Actually you are kinda right. When editing I forgot to make a few changes that would have counted as ten. So I was probably in the middle of making them when you read it.
I love doing something like this with my friends and I can't thank you my dear friend for your fun review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Well done. Here goes, 1) identical and different are contradictory, 2)twins would not be one alone, 3)fell up a tree, 4)three not two, 5) little and giant are contradictory, 6) man would not be she, 7) four - only two, 8)if he drove by, he could not help them.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Well done. Here goes, 1) identical and different are contradictory, 2)twins would not be one alone, 3)fell up a tree, 4)three not two, 5) little and giant are contradictory, 6) man would not be she, 7) four - only two, 8)if he drove by, he could not help them.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Anne you are so much fun and I just love that you played my silly little game with me. You actually found them all, as I forgot to make two changes when editing. So thank you my dear friend. It was fun having a laugh with you.
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You are very welcome
Comment from nomi338
I will not even attempt to lie. This one has me scratching my head. I never claimed to be that intelligent, but on this one I feel like a complete dummy. Were you being confusing on purpose, or is the answer so obvious that only a dummy like me would fail to get it?
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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I will not even attempt to lie. This one has me scratching my head. I never claimed to be that intelligent, but on this one I feel like a complete dummy. Were you being confusing on purpose, or is the answer so obvious that only a dummy like me would fail to get it?
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Hahaha! Yes Nomi, this was a poem of contradictions and things that don't make sense. I happened to know that you are a very intelligent guy so it may have been the way I worded the question. Look at it again and you will see that there are many things that should be making you scratch your head.
Comment from John Ciarmello
This was so much fun! As I began to read, I did say, Huh! And then instantly fell into the meaning. It was clever and well done. I loved it. Best, JohnC.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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This was so much fun! As I began to read, I did say, Huh! And then instantly fell into the meaning. It was clever and well done. I loved it. Best, JohnC.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Hi John. This was a lot of fun to write and even more fun for me to have my friends play along with me. I thank you so much for giving me a few laughs while you too had fun.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This had a whimsical feel. With its childlike nonsense it was fun to visualize and read out loud. As a matter of fact you should include that it should be read aloud. I tried both ways and the reading aloud had greater impact. Like Dr. Seuss. Well done.
Gretchen
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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This had a whimsical feel. With its childlike nonsense it was fun to visualize and read out loud. As a matter of fact you should include that it should be read aloud. I tried both ways and the reading aloud had greater impact. Like Dr. Seuss. Well done.
Gretchen
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much Gretchen and thanks for the fun comments. Fun is my favorite thing to write about and since you read this, I have edited and asked everyone to find the ten contradictions and many are enjoying it as much as I am. Thanks again my friend.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork, presentation, and title.
-You have used your 30 words well with a good topic.
-You must have a very good imagination to think all of this up.
-I wonder who might have fallen out of the tree, ha, ha.
-Effective imagery and rhyme with a lot of good twists
that were humorous.
-You gotta love "the little giant guy," too!!
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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-Good artwork, presentation, and title.
-You have used your 30 words well with a good topic.
-You must have a very good imagination to think all of this up.
-I wonder who might have fallen out of the tree, ha, ha.
-Effective imagery and rhyme with a lot of good twists
that were humorous.
-You gotta love "the little giant guy," too!!
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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You are so very kind Pam and I love having so much fun, with not only writing it, but the awesome reviews like yours. I have smiled through them all and it even means more are that everyone had fun with the silly game part of it. Thanks again my dear friend.
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You are very welcome, and this was a fun one to review. I loved the title as well as the poem. It is nice to make people smile😊
Comment from Wendy G
Well that is very original and imaginative, and shows a very vivid imagination! Excellent image as well. Sending good wishes for the contest.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Well that is very original and imaginative, and shows a very vivid imagination! Excellent image as well. Sending good wishes for the contest.
Wendy
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Thanks so very much Wendy and it is so much fun to share the fun with my friends like you. I so appreciate your kind comments!
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes, twins can look the same and act differently. I like how you use opposites and wrong numbers to tell this story.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Yes, twins can look the same and act differently. I like how you use opposites and wrong numbers to tell this story.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Hi Joan, I think that you might have been one of my first reviewers and I answered them in the wrong order. I had gone in and reworded a few and made more of a game out of it. I like how you caught that they can look the same and act different. That is actually one of things that I changed. Thank you so much for your kind comments for my silly little poem, my friend.
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You're very welcome. I'll check out the rewrite.
Joan
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I like the rewrite in monorhyme. I think this one flows better.
Joan
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Thanks so much Joan. That means a lot to me
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You're welcome.
