The Angels of Death
Two older ladies are on trial for murder.33 total reviews
Comment from newilk
I loved this story! Reminds me a bit of Arsenic and Old Lace! Older women in horror is something I've found is so underdone and I would love to see more of it! What a wonderful story!
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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I loved this story! Reminds me a bit of Arsenic and Old Lace! Older women in horror is something I've found is so underdone and I would love to see more of it! What a wonderful story!
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Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I am delighted you like it! Terry
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a great story for the contest, I'm also signed up, but there doesn't seem much point competing against this marvel. Nevertheless, I'm an honest person and I don't want to see you eliminated on a technicality. Your opening words have to match those of the prompt exactly. Only the punctuation can be adjusted. If you don't revise, you'll be put out of the line-up without a chance at redress. Kate xx PS sorry, no sixes left, but you know the problem...
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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This is a great story for the contest, I'm also signed up, but there doesn't seem much point competing against this marvel. Nevertheless, I'm an honest person and I don't want to see you eliminated on a technicality. Your opening words have to match those of the prompt exactly. Only the punctuation can be adjusted. If you don't revise, you'll be put out of the line-up without a chance at redress. Kate xx PS sorry, no sixes left, but you know the problem...
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Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Kate, thank you for the review, I will look at the line, I am delighted you like the story. Terry.
Comment from mermaids
I just loved this story. Excellent writing and character development. It is great that two older women write an interesting book and then are charged with murder in real life. This would make a good movie. I also like how this is about senior citizens living in a retirement community.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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I just loved this story. Excellent writing and character development. It is great that two older women write an interesting book and then are charged with murder in real life. This would make a good movie. I also like how this is about senior citizens living in a retirement community.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Mermaids, thank you for the six stars, I am delighted you enjoyed the story! Terry.
