Love Lost
A 5-7-5 Poem6 total reviews
Comment from billscott
Simple. Powerful. And full of truth. All describe your poem. Love it! And thank you for choosing my image for your presentation! The image suited your poem perfectly!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Simple. Powerful. And full of truth. All describe your poem. Love it! And thank you for choosing my image for your presentation! The image suited your poem perfectly!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thanks for your review and for sharing your image.
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Thanks for your review and for sharing your image.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, well done, well said 5-7-5 poem. In 17 syllables, your words speak of wisdom and experience. Of special note:
Equally Hopeless
(Like the saying goes, "You can't get blood out of a stone.")
Well chosen photo. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
LateBloomer
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Hello author, well done, well said 5-7-5 poem. In 17 syllables, your words speak of wisdom and experience. Of special note:
Equally Hopeless
(Like the saying goes, "You can't get blood out of a stone.")
Well chosen photo. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
LateBloomer
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thanks for your review!
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Thanks for your review!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Makes sense, but then I ask when has love ever made sense. It arrives unannounced and hangs about, sometimes for a day, or night, with others for life. Who is dealing the cards anyhow?
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Makes sense, but then I ask when has love ever made sense. It arrives unannounced and hangs about, sometimes for a day, or night, with others for life. Who is dealing the cards anyhow?
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Agree! Thanks for your review.
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Agree! Thanks for your review.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This one is excellent and made me stop and give it a second read because it was so good. I bet I am not alone liking this entry. I'll be keeping a close eye on the voting to see if I'm right. Good luck to you.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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This one is excellent and made me stop and give it a second read because it was so good. I bet I am not alone liking this entry. I'll be keeping a close eye on the voting to see if I'm right. Good luck to you.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thanks for your review!
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Thanks for your review!
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My pleasure! (though I have no idea why my review went through twice! It was so gracious of you not to write, "Helloooo! How many times are you planning to say the same thing!"
Comment from kahpot
I enjoyed this read very much, it makes me think of lost love, though we may not revive this lost love, love if true will always remain, an excellent 5-7-5 poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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I enjoyed this read very much, it makes me think of lost love, though we may not revive this lost love, love if true will always remain, an excellent 5-7-5 poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thanks for your review!
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Thanks for your review!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a poignant and well-stated 5-7-5 poem. The message is clear. The visual fits. However, the text is too small under that large visual. I would enlarge the text, make it that dark blue of the stems and center it. Those changes would enhance your presentation of this well-stated poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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This is a poignant and well-stated 5-7-5 poem. The message is clear. The visual fits. However, the text is too small under that large visual. I would enlarge the text, make it that dark blue of the stems and center it. Those changes would enhance your presentation of this well-stated poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thanks for the suggestion. I changed the font size.
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You are welcome. It's so much better under the visual. Thanks for being receptive to my suggestion.
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Thanks for the suggestion. I changed the font size.
