Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

But time is still a mystery, mistakes, and futile games
a maze we write in people's blood, on epitaphs with names,
And I am once again lost in a maze of the flexibility of time, as I try to come grips with its slippery nature. Thanks for sharing. Kate xx

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022

Thanks Kate, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

It is, as you say, a conundrum (history). You make a convincing
point, Roy. You are right about not being there unless you count
the history we are living though we aren't but in one place. Your
words give readers much to ponder. Those who believe in Jesus
will be quick to say it's due to their faith. While that can't be
argued, it sustains those throughout history despite what is
real or not.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

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 Comment Written 04-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022

Thanks Jan, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

A wonderful poem on how the Holy Sporit leads us in all truth, those who believe. As a student of both history and the Binle, the Bible is the most accurate book of record ever written, breathed by God.

Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ,
Sal XOs

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 Comment Written 04-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022

Thanks Sally, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy