Children Are Angels
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Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you now have two votes.
Yes children are Angels , they are precious yet our leaders prefer to spend money on war rather than feed /save them . One child every minute dies of hunger. 3 million in a year.
After nearly three years of pandemic , lots of families are struggling ... stress snd anxiety create tensions at home.
It's not the ideal environment for a growing child. Our society is falling apart.
We are overloading children with vaccines .. they live in constant fear of viruses ( monkey pox, tomato pox )
Our children deserve to inherit a flourishing home-planet , instead we have exploited, abused it.
I'm amazed people still want to bring their child into this world of dread.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Ciao poet, you now have two votes.
Yes children are Angels , they are precious yet our leaders prefer to spend money on war rather than feed /save them . One child every minute dies of hunger. 3 million in a year.
After nearly three years of pandemic , lots of families are struggling ... stress snd anxiety create tensions at home.
It's not the ideal environment for a growing child. Our society is falling apart.
We are overloading children with vaccines .. they live in constant fear of viruses ( monkey pox, tomato pox )
Our children deserve to inherit a flourishing home-planet , instead we have exploited, abused it.
I'm amazed people still want to bring their child into this world of dread.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
With your entry you have a chance of not only placing but perhaps winning as I see only one other that makes sense. Good luck.............................................................
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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With your entry you have a chance of not only placing but perhaps winning as I see only one other that makes sense. Good luck.............................................................
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thanks
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
It's a good poem about children. It seems you have followed the format for a nonet poem. The lettering is large and easy to read. The message is clear. However, because the poem is about kids, I would make the font more colorful. Perhaps, one of the vibrant colors in the visual. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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It's a good poem about children. It seems you have followed the format for a nonet poem. The lettering is large and easy to read. The message is clear. However, because the poem is about kids, I would make the font more colorful. Perhaps, one of the vibrant colors in the visual. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thanks!
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You are welcome.
