Sorry about dinner!
Better tomorrow, promise12 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hehehe..I'm glad you chose to write this poem instead of making dinner. I love the "lobster " font.
Excellent entry for the Nonet Poem Contest. You grasped the nonet form well. Nice presentation. Your descriptive words flow well expressing clear mental imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hehehe..I'm glad you chose to write this poem instead of making dinner. I love the "lobster " font.
Excellent entry for the Nonet Poem Contest. You grasped the nonet form well. Nice presentation. Your descriptive words flow well expressing clear mental imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much Gypsy. I'm glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very nicely done in the nonet form. I think most of us can identify with this poem. The picture should been one of a well done poem. I predict a win in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Very nicely done in the nonet form. I think most of us can identify with this poem. The picture should been one of a well done poem. I predict a win in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thank you Paul. I appreciate your supportive review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet poem, Sorry About Dinner, has the proper formatting and suggests that the family and their welfare comes second after Fanstory. Did I say 'suggests'?
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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This nonet poem, Sorry About Dinner, has the proper formatting and suggests that the family and their welfare comes second after Fanstory. Did I say 'suggests'?
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Lol. Thanks so much Bill!
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Hey, writing comes before all else. Especially when the urge strikes. Must address the urge before it expires.
Nice nonet. Meets all requirements although I questioned line 5 for a minute but I found out that (you'll) has one syllable.
Good job.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Hey, writing comes before all else. Especially when the urge strikes. Must address the urge before it expires.
Nice nonet. Meets all requirements although I questioned line 5 for a minute but I found out that (you'll) has one syllable.
Good job.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Gary.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, love the lobster font, food on the brain here, but none in the tummy until tomorrow! You made me smile with this one, a fun nonet, imaginative and perfectly formed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Ha ha ha, love the lobster font, food on the brain here, but none in the tummy until tomorrow! You made me smile with this one, a fun nonet, imaginative and perfectly formed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this fun one! Thanks so much for reviewing. Appreciated.
Comment from royowen
I couldn't help having a giggle at this beautifully provocative post, I think we all think like that, except I don't enter contests, so it gives me tome to get the dinner on, I share cooking duties with my wife, so it's alright. A beautifully written nonet, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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I couldn't help having a giggle at this beautifully provocative post, I think we all think like that, except I don't enter contests, so it gives me tome to get the dinner on, I share cooking duties with my wife, so it's alright. A beautifully written nonet, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thank you Roy. Glad you enjoyed this fun one!
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Comment from Marienkiefer
Well, I do say, you have whipped up a wonderful poem, in Nonet style....Dinner can wait...
Sparkling in your poem:
-I enjoyed the humour.
-Wonderful idea sourcing.
-Progression and rhyme.
Thanks for showing through your writing and good-natured humour it is possible to achieve something if you have the mind, even if running out of time.
A very pleasant read.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Well, I do say, you have whipped up a wonderful poem, in Nonet style....Dinner can wait...
Sparkling in your poem:
-I enjoyed the humour.
-Wonderful idea sourcing.
-Progression and rhyme.
Thanks for showing through your writing and good-natured humour it is possible to achieve something if you have the mind, even if running out of time.
A very pleasant read.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much - a lovely review, very encouraging.
Comment from Fleedleflump
Lol, food for the mind indeed. I like that you used gentle humour and a little autobiography to bring your last minute nonet to life. Great fun, and made me smile :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Lol, food for the mind indeed. I like that you used gentle humour and a little autobiography to bring your last minute nonet to life. Great fun, and made me smile :-)
Mike
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Glad to make you smile. Thanks so much for reviewing. Always appreciated.
Comment from RodG
I doubt my wife would accept my apology if I promised dinner and delivered a poem instead. She likely wouldn't even read it. I like how yours even used rhyme. And you put a smile on my face this morning. Rod
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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I doubt my wife would accept my apology if I promised dinner and delivered a poem instead. She likely wouldn't even read it. I like how yours even used rhyme. And you put a smile on my face this morning. Rod
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Glad to make you smile. My husband doesn't read mine ... Thanks so much for reviewing. Always appreciated.
Comment from Regina Elliott
A wonderful nonet. My late
husband, rest his soul, felt I
spent too much time writing
poetry, and not enough time
on housework, lol!!! My best
wishes for the contest and
may you have a bright and
creative week. Blessings ~
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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A wonderful nonet. My late
husband, rest his soul, felt I
spent too much time writing
poetry, and not enough time
on housework, lol!!! My best
wishes for the contest and
may you have a bright and
creative week. Blessings ~
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thank you Regina! Love your review and good wishes!
