Sorry about dinner!
Better tomorrow, promise12 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
That meal looks great. It would be worth the wait. It does not hurt to skip a full meal. There is always something in the cupboard or refrigerator to snack on. I enjoyed reading your poem. You made the deadline, now, I hope you win. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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That meal looks great. It would be worth the wait. It does not hurt to skip a full meal. There is always something in the cupboard or refrigerator to snack on. I enjoyed reading your poem. You made the deadline, now, I hope you win. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much Carolyn! I think you're right.And thanks for your good wishes!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a not too good package for dinner occasioned by the prevailing writing deadlines, which if ignored could have caused loss of moneys used for reserving one's slots for the contest.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of imagery.
Excellent work. Bravo.
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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a not too good package for dinner occasioned by the prevailing writing deadlines, which if ignored could have caused loss of moneys used for reserving one's slots for the contest.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of imagery.
Excellent work. Bravo.
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much, Lloyd.
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Remain Blessed.
