Hung Out to Dry
A 100 word story. See author notes first.15 total reviews
Comment from damommy
I think Pinky is the only one enjoying the wash. None of them seem happy about the dryer. Why would they? All that bumping around and falling into each other. Delightful story.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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I think Pinky is the only one enjoying the wash. None of them seem happy about the dryer. Why would they? All that bumping around and falling into each other. Delightful story.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Judy Lawless
You've done a find job of telling this humorous piece of flash fiction, Mike. The picture is adorable and I'm sure this would be loved by young children. The poor critters thought they'd be done on the line, but I guess they didn't know about fluffing in the dryer. lol
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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You've done a find job of telling this humorous piece of flash fiction, Mike. The picture is adorable and I'm sure this would be loved by young children. The poor critters thought they'd be done on the line, but I guess they didn't know about fluffing in the dryer. lol
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hi, Judy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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You're most welcome, Mike.
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hi! Such a charming and
delightful, "light story," What
I mean by that is its not a
depressing story, it made me
smile. Many blessings to you
and yours. ~
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hi! Such a charming and
delightful, "light story," What
I mean by that is its not a
depressing story, it made me
smile. Many blessings to you
and yours. ~
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hi, Regina. Thank you for your kind words! I'll be by to read.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Susan Newell
Mike,
I enjoyed your hundred-word skit. One wonders what else these fluff bundles could tell if they weren't obsessed with their present predicaments. Fun read.
Sue
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Mike,
I enjoyed your hundred-word skit. One wonders what else these fluff bundles could tell if they weren't obsessed with their present predicaments. Fun read.
Sue
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hi, Sue. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Most welcome.
Comment from newilk
It's such a fun story! Each character has their own clear voice it's so wonderful to see a story inspired by something as simple as some toys hung out to dry.
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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It's such a fun story! Each character has their own clear voice it's so wonderful to see a story inspired by something as simple as some toys hung out to dry.
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words! I'll be by to read.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
