Tricks AND Treats
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Comment from Wendy G
This is well presented, and has a good choice of font and background. The rhyme works well. I like that you have offered some positives and focused on the fun. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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This is well presented, and has a good choice of font and background. The rhyme works well. I like that you have offered some positives and focused on the fun. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate this nice review. :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A cute poem for children on Halloween. Halloween brings out skeletons which are not the most pleasant thing to look at or even the sight of naked skulls. Scary after effects can happen if you're walking alone at night.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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A cute poem for children on Halloween. Halloween brings out skeletons which are not the most pleasant thing to look at or even the sight of naked skulls. Scary after effects can happen if you're walking alone at night.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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I used to think skeletons were scary, then I realized that we all have one, after I took anatomy class. Kind of took all of the fun out of it. Thanks for reading. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Halloween poem for children. writing prompt Contest. You grasped the. form well. Wonderful presentation. Your rhymes don't seem forced and your descriptive words flow well expressing clear mental imagery. I love Halloween (*<>*)
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Excellent entry for the Halloween poem for children. writing prompt Contest. You grasped the. form well. Wonderful presentation. Your rhymes don't seem forced and your descriptive words flow well expressing clear mental imagery. I love Halloween (*<>*)
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thank you for this great review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Tom Horonzy
What can be said of each of these submissions are they are good. Choosing just was one is not going to be fun and for reviews which do I choose. Oh well, a spooky decision seems in order, doesn't it?
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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What can be said of each of these submissions are they are good. Choosing just was one is not going to be fun and for reviews which do I choose. Oh well, a spooky decision seems in order, doesn't it?
Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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I think you're right, it does. Thanks for reading my poem, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry to the Halloween contest. The rhyme scheme is consistent throughout the poem. The text is large and easy to read. I like everything being colorful because it is a poem for children. The animated visual is perfect.
Drop down the first line one notch from the bottom of the visual. In this line replace the They'll with There will be another one next year,
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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This is a good entry to the Halloween contest. The rhyme scheme is consistent throughout the poem. The text is large and easy to read. I like everything being colorful because it is a poem for children. The animated visual is perfect.
Drop down the first line one notch from the bottom of the visual. In this line replace the They'll with There will be another one next year,
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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I've changed that line for the better...thank you for all your help. I'm so glad you like my poem. :)
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You are welcome. It's the best one I have read thus far.
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a fun poem and very descriptive of Halloween festivities. I'm not sure if it was purposeful or not, but I was troubled by the three-time use of "they'll" where "there'll" or even "the'll" would be better.
I am not a great critic of poetry, but think this line:
There's black and orange lights strung,
might be better as:
Black and orange lights are strung,
Good luck in the contest.
Sue
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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This is a fun poem and very descriptive of Halloween festivities. I'm not sure if it was purposeful or not, but I was troubled by the three-time use of "they'll" where "there'll" or even "the'll" would be better.
I am not a great critic of poetry, but think this line:
There's black and orange lights strung,
might be better as:
Black and orange lights are strung,
Good luck in the contest.
Sue
Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I've changed that line for the better. I really appreciate the help as well as you taking the time to read my poem. :)
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Regina Elliott
This is a delightful without
being too scary children's
Halloween poem. Very
imaginative too. My very
best wishes for the Halloween contest. Many
blessings to you. ~
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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This is a delightful without
being too scary children's
Halloween poem. Very
imaginative too. My very
best wishes for the Halloween contest. Many
blessings to you. ~
Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I really appreciate this terrific review. :)
Comment from JanPerry
It's perfect, you have encaptured the very essence of Halloween my friend. I've never been a fan of scary stuff. I like to feel safe and cosy at all times, so I don't understand celebrating witches and elves.
Its Abcb rhyming with all the delights and satire of this special day that the US celebrates every year. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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It's perfect, you have encaptured the very essence of Halloween my friend. I've never been a fan of scary stuff. I like to feel safe and cosy at all times, so I don't understand celebrating witches and elves.
Its Abcb rhyming with all the delights and satire of this special day that the US celebrates every year. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thank you for this exceptional review, it makes my day! :)
