Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 76 "Golden needle and silver thread"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Faith Based Poem contest.
Nice presentation. Your words flow well and are very descriptive for a clear understanding.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Excellent entry for the Faith Based Poem contest.
Nice presentation. Your words flow well and are very descriptive for a clear understanding.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Thank You very much!
Comment from LJbutterfly
If your dream came true, many of the ills of the world would disappear, and mankind could live in peace and love. Your use of metaphor and alliteration adds color to your powerful message. My favorite lines begin with, "So, I sat and sewed and sewed some more," which poetically describe your use of the Golden Needle and Silver Thread. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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If your dream came true, many of the ills of the world would disappear, and mankind could live in peace and love. Your use of metaphor and alliteration adds color to your powerful message. My favorite lines begin with, "So, I sat and sewed and sewed some more," which poetically describe your use of the Golden Needle and Silver Thread. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
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LJ. Thank you! 🙏🙏
Comment from Sally Law
Ah, this is so beautiful, J, and reminiscent of Martin Luther King's I Have a Dream speech. The art is perfectly chosen.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest
Sal XOs
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Ah, this is so beautiful, J, and reminiscent of Martin Luther King's I Have a Dream speech. The art is perfectly chosen.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest
Sal XOs
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
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smiles back in abdunance~
Comment from John Ciarmello
I love the concept of the golden needle and silver thread. You've done a nice job with this dream of sowing torn souls and mending broken hearts with needle and thread. I enjoyed this poem. Best, JohnC
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I love the concept of the golden needle and silver thread. You've done a nice job with this dream of sowing torn souls and mending broken hearts with needle and thread. I enjoyed this poem. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
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Thank you John, I truly appreciate your comments.
Comment from Susan Newell
This poem is a very creative metaphor for the healing power of God, and of His followers. It is true that hearts can be mended and joy can be restored. Very well composed poem.
Sue
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This poem is a very creative metaphor for the healing power of God, and of His followers. It is true that hearts can be mended and joy can be restored. Very well composed poem.
Sue
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
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I truly appreciate your comments.
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Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
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I truly appreciate your comments.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Beautifully written poem for the faith entry. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful
Photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
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Beautifully written poem for the faith entry. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful
Photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
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I truly appreciate your comments.
Comment from Boogienights
This is beautiful. If only that would work, maybe the world could heal. Its a wonderful dream to have, perhaps there is a hidden meaning in your dream. This really is a wonderful contest entry, best of luck to you. :)
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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This is beautiful. If only that would work, maybe the world could heal. Its a wonderful dream to have, perhaps there is a hidden meaning in your dream. This really is a wonderful contest entry, best of luck to you. :)
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
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I truly appreciate your comments.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
Your wonderfully-creative poem gives a powerful message.
I like the way you use precious metals as metaphors for healing hearts and doing God's work.
Excellent poem.
Good luck with this and all your writing.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Author,
Your wonderfully-creative poem gives a powerful message.
I like the way you use precious metals as metaphors for healing hearts and doing God's work.
Excellent poem.
Good luck with this and all your writing.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
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I truly appreciate your comments.
Comment from harmony13
I found the author's words to be extremely creative. I pondered on the
these words and thought about how there are so many we can help others heal through faith. The poems flows and connects well. I felt this poem has a strong message. The artwork is awesome! Great Poem!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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I found the author's words to be extremely creative. I pondered on the
these words and thought about how there are so many we can help others heal through faith. The poems flows and connects well. I felt this poem has a strong message. The artwork is awesome! Great Poem!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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I truly appreciate your comments.
