Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

Alright now! I like a poem with a little spice. The text is great. The font size is good. The visual fits well. This is a good entry to the contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022

Thanks for your review.

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 01-Oct-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

A strong contender for the
newly married contest. It is
artistically crafted. Reminds
me fondly of being a 23 year
old just getting married to my
late husband over 40 years
ago. Best wishes for the
competition. Blessings ~

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022

Thanks for your review.

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello author, very good, very cute, and a little ooh-la-la.
In 17 syllables, your words have painted a complete scene filled with good sensory appeal. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022

Thanks for your review.