Comment from mrsmajor

Excellent

I like this one, the ideas are true, and your rhymes are great...Yep that sounds like a get fit session to me...without a doubt...God luck in the contest, this is a good entry..to me!

Warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022

Thank you

reply by mrsmajor on 10-Sep-2022

You're very welcome!

Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

This is an excellent entry for the Rhyme It contest. Your imagery is spot on as it paint a perfect picture of a workout in the gym. Well done.

Good luck in the contest,

Eugene

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022

Thank you

Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

A stellar contender here. I can't exercise in late afternoon or evening, it would
keep me up. Anyway, I
appreciate the humor, my
very best wishes for the contest, and happy weekend.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022

Thank you

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Exerciser,

hahahaha! Sounds like you are thoroughly enjoying these work-out moments. But I think there's every good chance your teacher is faking it, too. I mean, who REALLY loves that stuff? It's just the feelings afterward that are treasured... whew. Thanks!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022

I don't know. My teacher has a permanent smile on her face. She is very cheery. Anyway, thank you very much for your kind review.

Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova

Excellent

Yeah, that'll get those endorphins flowing, alright. Great poem. I could almost feel the workout as you described it. Good writing. Nice rhyming and meter.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022

Thank you for your kind review.