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Final Jeopardy

Make sure you final answer is in the form of a question.

29 total reviews 
Comment from Douglas Goff
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

May I have 'you are brilliant' for a hundred?

Man this is so good. I forgot that I was looking for errors when I was reading because I got caught up in the story line.

You Sir, are great!

Thanks!!!

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
    Douglas, Thank you for the six stars! I am delighted you found my story interesting, and thank you for the review. Terry.
reply by Douglas Goff on 13-Oct-2022
    You earned it. It was so very good. I enjoy the way your mind works Sir!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Excellent
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Yes, I think my actions resemble Kevin's on most nights. LOL. I think I enjoy your stories so much because they are always something your readers and I can relate to. Great story. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
    Ric, thank you very much for reading, I hope I can reach the standard you set. Terry.
reply by Ric Myworld on 12-Oct-2022
    You're tool box and skills are way beyond mine, my friend! Ric
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
    BS!!!
reply by Ric Myworld on 12-Oct-2022
    Thanks, nice of you to say: or is it? LOL But I stand by my statement!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
    LOL, Oh I just checked who has the top-rated story of the month so far... It ain't Helen, Hump, or me...
reply by Ric Myworld on 12-Oct-2022
    Oh, it won't last long. It'll end up about 6th like last month. I"m not even in the same league as you all. Just a rookie, picking up the pieces. I don't think any of us really care that much about where we finish. For me, it's just the fellowship with nice people. Have a wonderful rest of your week!
Comment from JoannaN
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is funny :) a nice story, with a good twist at the end. Writing a story based on dialogues only is challenging, but you succeeded in doing so. Well done :)

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
    Joanna, thank you so much for the six stars! I am pleased you enjoyed the story. Terry.
reply by JoannaN on 11-Oct-2022
    You're welcome :)
Comment from Annmuma
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

These 6 stars are earned by creativity, clever thought and an interesting presentation. I must admit I sort of anticipated the end, but was not sold on it until I read. The flow good and I enjoyed the read.

Good writing! I did not see any spag issues, ann

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
    Ann, thank you for the six stars! I am delighted you enjoyed my story. Thanks for pushing it over the line. Terry.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Excellent
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This is a powerful metaphor. Actually the use of this figure of speech is the crux of this entire adventure. There were some subjects here to cause the reader to give pause. A great concept to present to the reader.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
    Liz, thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Terry.
reply by Liz O'Neill on 11-Oct-2022
    ***smile***
Comment from royowen
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Of course what I hear in my head is. What have you done with the gifts I gave you, did you you choose to be compassionate, generous and graciously loving to all, or did you grasp to your chest and not spend magnanimously. Beautifully written Terry, well done, great post. Blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    Roy, very insightful! Thank you for reading. Terry.
reply by royowen on 10-Oct-2022
    Most welcome Terru
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This reminded me of the saying 'be careful what you wish for.'
I enjoyed reading your post, Terry. You expressed your appreciation
for ATrebek by using the Jeopardy theme well throughout your
story. I could see and 'hear' the dialogue as I read. Your wishes
made were reasonable. I believe ATrebek had a good laugh and
enjoyed your fun post.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    Jan, thank you for reading my story. It would be cool if Alex got to read it! Thanks, Terry.
Comment from Tpa
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An excellent writing using the game show for a metaphor on life. I think most of us play that game throughout our lives. As your life lines expressed, it illustrated the manner we treat others, which gives credit for helping its contestant towards winning the game. This was my interpretation of your work. I also liked your ending.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    Thank you for reading my story. I really liked your insightful review! Terry.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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Damn Terry, here you go again writing a great story that leaves me once again wanting more. i wanted to know the outcome of the "Final Life Jeopardy" game. Here you go making it a dream. Jeez! What's a gal gotta do to get some story ending satisfaction? LOL I loved the Jeopardy game and was sadden when Alex passed away from cancer. Kudos for a well-written story. You are a TEASE!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    Sandra, thank you for reading and for your most fun review! I did toy with a couple of endings but decided to leave a bit ambiguous. Terry.
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 10-Oct-2022
    You are welcome, TNT~ not for dynamite, but Terry the Tease! LOL
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    LOL
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 10-Oct-2022
    What are you laughing at TTT? LOL
Comment from Spitfire
Excellent
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'Jeopardy' mixed up with 'So You Want to be a Millionaire'. I watched both shows faithfully. The setting for this is a journey to an Afterlife. Will the contestant go to heaven or hell? Looks as if he won-- a good nap. Cleverly done.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    Thank you for reading and for you for review. Terry.