'Til Last Breath
A Contest Entry3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet , I gave you your first vote.
I loved the idea of lovers riding the waves. .. that is life s ups and downs , in the thick and thin.
Great pic too.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Ciao poet , I gave you your first vote.
I loved the idea of lovers riding the waves. .. that is life s ups and downs , in the thick and thin.
Great pic too.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you for the vote--I'm glad you liked it!
Comment from lancellot
two hearts intertwined
riding the waves together
shared life 'til last breath
Okay, yes I like this one. I seems simple on the surface but like the ocean it pictures, it has great depth.
A good entry.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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two hearts intertwined
riding the waves together
shared life 'til last breath
Okay, yes I like this one. I seems simple on the surface but like the ocean it pictures, it has great depth.
A good entry.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Julie G1
Ah, a love story in a form. Very hard to do, but this poet handled it so well. Both the graphic and haiku worked for this reader, well handled. I hope you keep on writing.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Ah, a love story in a form. Very hard to do, but this poet handled it so well. Both the graphic and haiku worked for this reader, well handled. I hope you keep on writing.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
