Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

May the dream continue beyond the veil and through eternity. Seems you two are a perfect match. .....................................................................
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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022

I've always thought so! Thank you for reading my poem and for this thoughtful review. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Hot peppers and honey? Opposites attract it seems and this love started with a kiss and romance was on the cards, fine rhymes and flow, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022

Thank you for this great review, I'm always glad to hear from you. :)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed reading it. I liked the color scheme, the image,
and the story told. The rhymes and lines flowed smoothly
with good imagery.

hopping I was (3rd line)-->hoping
Thanks for sharing,
Best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022

Thank you for this nice review and for the correction. I appreciate both. :)