Comment from Bill Schott

Good

Only a dream!?! Why would you end this great story with such a meh premise. I suppose there was no other way, with the end rushing up, to get out of a story with a woman in combat during D-Day. That's just such a deus ex machina finish.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022

Thank you!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your contest entry read well, Mystery Author. You told
a riveting war story about Beverly. Your words created
great imagery. I could see the intensity of the battle.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022

Thank you!

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Hello Writer,
This is an excellent story for the contest.
Nightmares can sometimes makes very good stories
and can seems like reality.
Fortunately for Beverly, this was a dream.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the voting.
Robert

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022

Thank you!

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I enjoyed your flash fiction! Reading about the battle was exciting, and taking that last run was great. Then the reveal that it was a dream and needed to be in a flash fiction contest? Awesome. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022

Thank you!