A v-mail letter
A letter from a World War II soldier24 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, interesting letter.
notes
You should check the paragraph spacing in the 6th paragraph.
My lieutenant is all about {safety �???�??�?�¢?"his own.}
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Hmm, interesting letter.
notes
You should check the paragraph spacing in the 6th paragraph.
My lieutenant is all about {safety �???�??�?�¢?"his own.}
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Thank you for the catch, all it was supposed to be was a hyphen!
Best regards,
Mary
Comment from Raul1
It is interesting and entertaining to read. The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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It is interesting and entertaining to read. The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your kind comments and review.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment from royowen
How lovely this is, my dad was at Dunkirk in France at the beginning of the war, he was one of the 300,000 British soldiers evacuated from the beaches, but they returned five years later. Thanks for this Mary, it was beautifully and movingly written, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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How lovely this is, my dad was at Dunkirk in France at the beginning of the war, he was one of the 300,000 British soldiers evacuated from the beaches, but they returned five years later. Thanks for this Mary, it was beautifully and movingly written, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Thank you Roy for your review and very kind words.
Blessings,
Mary
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Most welcome
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
First off, congratulations on your 100th post!!
What a tremendous accomplishment, you must be so proud.
I enjoyed reading this story, as it is written with emotion, love, and longing.
I can not begin to imagine what serving in this war was like, but this letter says a lot about your dad's state of mind.
Your writing is descriptive and well crafted. You successfully paint a vivid picture of the scene for the reader to view and become a part of.
Well done!
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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First off, congratulations on your 100th post!!
What a tremendous accomplishment, you must be so proud.
I enjoyed reading this story, as it is written with emotion, love, and longing.
I can not begin to imagine what serving in this war was like, but this letter says a lot about your dad's state of mind.
Your writing is descriptive and well crafted. You successfully paint a vivid picture of the scene for the reader to view and become a part of.
Well done!
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I truly appreciate your very kind words, best wishes and review.
Best regards,
Mary
