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Bloody Hill Massacre

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26 total reviews 
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This was quite a fun poem. I loved the directors change of heart on the genre. Your poem ran together very nicely. It was like a flash fiction piece but rhyming. I really liked it. Best of luck in the contest.
Gretchen

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much for this nice review. :)
Comment from Gloria ....
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Author, this is a fine entry into the contest. I have on occasion wondered how actors feel later on in life about having starred in some of these horror films. Mind you, as you have so aptly illustrated it is quite different on set with the fake blood and rubber axe, than only seeing the final hair-raising product.

Wishing you much luck in the booth. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thank you for this terrific review, I'm so glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job, Mystery Author, using those required words
to tell a fun little story. Your words flowed smoothly with great
rhymes and imagery. I liked the image and the color scheme. I
could feel the angst of the director and the aloofness of the female
lead.
Thanks of sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This is a creative and dramatic use of all required words for the poem contest. Your rhyming flowed smoothly, unforced, and told a fascinating story. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thank you I appreciate it very much. :)
Comment from nomi338
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Good or bad it will make a pile of money. In this current day and time, blood is much sweeter than honey. Slash a throat, rather than kiss it, remove any tender love parts, no one will even miss it. It is ok to show naked body shots, especially if it is oozing gore, meanwhile the audience is screaming and hoping for you to show them more.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    I love this rhyming review! Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
reply by nomi338 on 15-Sep-2022
    You are welcome. It was a fun read.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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This would be a horror just trying to make the movie. The heat from the sun can make a person irritable. The fake blood dried, the make-up running down the actress' face would be a nightmare. I would call it a wrap. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thank you for reading my poem, its very appreciated. :)
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 14-Sep-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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You incorporated the required words seamlessly into your poem. The rhyme scheme is on point. The text is large and easy to read. The visual fits well. A pale blue background would make your red letters not appear so stark. Overall, this is a well-done contest entry. Good luck!

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thank you for this great review and for taking the time to read my poem. :)
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 14-Sep-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from lavendermoon14
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Such a fun poem. Thank you for sharing. All of the words were included perfectly, and the structure created a great flow to the piece. Thank you so much.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thank you for reading my poem and for this thoughtful review. :)
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Very well done. It is creative, clever, and brilliant.
I enjoyed the read and wish you the very best in the contest.
I had to give you a six for this.
Best regards,
Mary

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thank you so much for this exceptional review, it means a lot to me.:)
reply by Mary Vigasin on 14-Sep-2022
    I am sorry. A mom's death at an early age is difficult for a child. The lost possibilities and lost memories of her last a lifetime.
    mary
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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I gave up this genre of film fifty years ago. Same script time and again. Only the actors change. Must be change makers for the producers and directors keep making them.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    I don't watch them either anymore....the older I get, the less gore I can take. :) thanks for this great review.