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Bloody Hill Massacre

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26 total reviews 
Comment from Wendy G
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Very clever. I thought at first it was for the story in a poem contest. You show great imagination and creativity using those specified words , and constructed an excellent and humorous poem. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thank you for this encouraging review, it's so nice to hear from you. :)
Comment from Bridge
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I loved the little story in poem format. I don't enjoy horror movies but I loved your poem. I especially loved the rhyming. All the best in the contest.
With regards

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thank you, I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh my goodness, this is a horror story with blood splattering on Halloween and you included all the words for the contest here, appropriate for the forthcoming celebration, much enjoyed, inventive and chilling, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thank you, I'm slglad you liked my poem. Thank you for reading it. :)
Comment from karenina
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Good answer to the challenge! You had a bit of fun with it, and why not? I managed to find all the required words within...

A perfect heading towards Halloween theme.

Good luck in the contest!

Karenina

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 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thanknyou for this positive review, it means a lot to me. :)
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I enjoyed this verse for one simple reason......
I was transported to the set of the film.

Well done!!

You have word painted your way to six stars!
The sensory details pull the reader into the world you have created.

It almost reads like a short story, as it has a beginning, middle, and end.

The rhymes work well and flow with fluidity.

This is the kind of poem that you read...
reread....
and then reread again!!













 Comment Written 13-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thank you for this exceptional review, I appreciate it more then you know. :)
Comment from royowen
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The moderm action film, and it seems even the murder plots are losing story and gaining lots of action, or alternatively lots of blood, such as in your fine poem, which explores the whole gambit of the entertainment scene, an excellent post in aabb rhykmg, super post. Beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
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 Comment Written 13-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)
reply by royowen on 14-Sep-2022
    Well done