A good life
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
Sage advice because as you stated life is short.
Meaningful relationships are what are most important along the way.
Can live without a bunch of possessions that only collect dust.
People are much more important than material things ever could be.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Sage advice because as you stated life is short.
Meaningful relationships are what are most important along the way.
Can live without a bunch of possessions that only collect dust.
People are much more important than material things ever could be.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you Brett for your thoughtful words.
Wendy
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
You presented an important principle for life in your brief poem. My family keeps me centered, each member in a special way, and they add meaning to all I do. Also, I treasure my friends.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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You presented an important principle for life in your brief poem. My family keeps me centered, each member in a special way, and they add meaning to all I do. Also, I treasure my friends.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Thank you Verna. That encapsulates my thoughts exactly. People matter, not things. We need to look after our relationships, that?s where our fulfilment lies. Beginning with our relationship with the Lord.
Wendy
Comment from jessizero
This was a great poem in sixteen syllables. I very much agree with the advice given about meaningful relationships. Thank you for sharing this poem, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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This was a great poem in sixteen syllables. I very much agree with the advice given about meaningful relationships. Thank you for sharing this poem, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Thank you Jessi. Glad you enjoyed.
Wendy
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-1-2-12, A Good Life, has the proper formatting and reminds us that it takes a village to make a life. "Live well" is the best advice.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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This 1-1-2-12, A Good Life, has the proper formatting and reminds us that it takes a village to make a life. "Live well" is the best advice.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Thank you Bill. Appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from jaded831
Life is short, you resolve one problem, you get a break, and another problem is right around the corner. We need to enjoy each moment of contentment. Company of good friends and family make living worthwhile.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Life is short, you resolve one problem, you get a break, and another problem is right around the corner. We need to enjoy each moment of contentment. Company of good friends and family make living worthwhile.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much. Appreciated, I?m glad you enjoyed it.
Wendy
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a meaningful write, well stated and presented in its entirety - both verse and photograph 'maximized' for articulate and inspiring effect...
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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In my opinion, a meaningful write, well stated and presented in its entirety - both verse and photograph 'maximized' for articulate and inspiring effect...
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your lovely review. Most encouraging!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Good luck. This stands a chance to not only place but win. This challenge was difficult as many will take a short sentence instead of a thought for lines one two and three
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Good luck. This stands a chance to not only place but win. This challenge was difficult as many will take a short sentence instead of a thought for lines one two and three
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you Tom. Lovely words of encouragement.
Comment from royowen
You're absolutely right my friend, life is certainly short, and the momentum of life seems to be rushing by at a phenomenal rate, and getting faster. Beautifully written, great entry, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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You're absolutely right my friend, life is certainly short, and the momentum of life seems to be rushing by at a phenomenal rate, and getting faster. Beautifully written, great entry, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thank you Roy. Lovely words of encouragement.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
A good advice 1-1-2-12 poem. I like that you used large, easy to read font. The message is clear. The visual fits perfectly. I wish you luck in the contest. You have a good entry.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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A good advice 1-1-2-12 poem. I like that you used large, easy to read font. The message is clear. The visual fits perfectly. I wish you luck in the contest. You have a good entry.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Many thanks Sandra. I appreciate your lovely review and good wishes.
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You are welcome.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
We never really know how short life is until we near the end of our own. Then we wonder, what happened? where did it all go? Absolutely, live life for all you have because before you know it, it is over.
Very nice verse.
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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We never really know how short life is until we near the end of our own. Then we wonder, what happened? where did it all go? Absolutely, live life for all you have because before you know it, it is over.
Very nice verse.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Many thanks Gary. Yes, people matter more than "things" and bring more happiness.