The Walkers
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Cal Recovers."The Final Gabriel Hope Journey
9 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have read previous posts, and this is a good addition to them. I like the way you've humanized scripture. This is very good writing of good and evil. Please continue the story.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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I have read previous posts, and this is a good addition to them. I like the way you've humanized scripture. This is very good writing of good and evil. Please continue the story.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Hi, Barbara. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Perspectives are different, spiritual influence and coverage is familiar, good versus evil, dimensions diversified but conceptual derivation goes straight to the bad and good, Satan can never win, may bad ever try; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Perspectives are different, spiritual influence and coverage is familiar, good versus evil, dimensions diversified but conceptual derivation goes straight to the bad and good, Satan can never win, may bad ever try; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks again!
Comment from Ric Myworld
I've enjoyed your story and detailed characters from beginning to end. Now, I just wish that I had a six so that I could reward your story properly. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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I've enjoyed your story and detailed characters from beginning to end. Now, I just wish that I had a six so that I could reward your story properly. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Hi, Ric. Thank you for your kind words and thoughts of a six. It's deeply appreciated.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from estory
This is an interesting concept, depicting good and evil through these warrior characters; I think it would be great for young adults. This chapter is full of color and emotional dialogue, very surreal scenery and we get all these temptations Satan tries to use to ruin our outlook on life. Using rage and fear and frustration to get us to abandon God. I thought you did a great job creating a very Star Wars kind of Satan and a general for him. estory
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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This is an interesting concept, depicting good and evil through these warrior characters; I think it would be great for young adults. This chapter is full of color and emotional dialogue, very surreal scenery and we get all these temptations Satan tries to use to ruin our outlook on life. Using rage and fear and frustration to get us to abandon God. I thought you did a great job creating a very Star Wars kind of Satan and a general for him. estory
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Oh Mike, you have done a great job with your Gabriel Hope series of stories. What a wonderful group of soldiers defending the faithful against Satan and his hoards. Well done. Cal has recovered. I was sure she would. Well done my friend. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Oh Mike, you have done a great job with your Gabriel Hope series of stories. What a wonderful group of soldiers defending the faithful against Satan and his hoards. Well done. Cal has recovered. I was sure she would. Well done my friend. Nancy:)
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Hi, Nancy. Thank you for your kind words! We're winding this one down.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from royowen
This is well written Mike, it seems that Michael is certainly recognisable, as the battle arch Angel, and you've managed to build a story around, and Satan certainly conversed with firstly Adam and Eve, and with God Himself, then with the temptation of Satan. Just love the way you've humanised the heavenly beings, or are they? Beautifully written Mike, great story, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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This is well written Mike, it seems that Michael is certainly recognisable, as the battle arch Angel, and you've managed to build a story around, and Satan certainly conversed with firstly Adam and Eve, and with God Himself, then with the temptation of Satan. Just love the way you've humanised the heavenly beings, or are they? Beautifully written Mike, great story, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Ho, Roy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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You too Mike
Comment from Jay Squires
What an imagination you have and you fill your pages with a view of spiritual life about which few write. Your story has a strong religious bent to it, but it is also filled with man's passions. Your story revolves around the battle between the Angels of heaven and the fallen angels. A good chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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What an imagination you have and you fill your pages with a view of spiritual life about which few write. Your story has a strong religious bent to it, but it is also filled with man's passions. Your story revolves around the battle between the Angels of heaven and the fallen angels. A good chapter.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Hi, Jay. Thank you for your kind words! I appreciate you stopping by.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Douglas Goff
Nice work. You have an interesting mind.
Some catches:
third paragraph period after General not a comma.
12 paragraphs from the end of story "Yeah," Gabe
That comma should be a period.
There are several dialogue punctuation issues. I have trouble with the same. Revisit it.
Overall, very creative.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Nice work. You have an interesting mind.
Some catches:
third paragraph period after General not a comma.
12 paragraphs from the end of story "Yeah," Gabe
That comma should be a period.
There are several dialogue punctuation issues. I have trouble with the same. Revisit it.
Overall, very creative.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Hi, Douglas, Thank you for your kind words and help with this chapter.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from BethShelby
You have a very creative imagination to write this Spiritual fiction. It is very good. I like the characters you have created. It is all about the battle between good and evil that we all fight. I like the way you bring in how thoughts in our minds can even cause us to sin.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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You have a very creative imagination to write this Spiritual fiction. It is very good. I like the characters you have created. It is all about the battle between good and evil that we all fight. I like the way you bring in how thoughts in our minds can even cause us to sin.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Hi, Beth. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
