Where Is It?
An ode to walking into a room and forgetting why18 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
I'm looking around for some of your stuff. This is a great Haiku. Good humor. I'm going to dig a little deeper to see if I can find some longer poems.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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I'm looking around for some of your stuff. This is a great Haiku. Good humor. I'm going to dig a little deeper to see if I can find some longer poems.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you
Comment from jaded831
Very funny, which was the point. We all do that, it is said Einstein would pass his house forgetting where he lived being so deep in thought. You're in good company. You must have allot on your mind.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Very funny, which was the point. We all do that, it is said Einstein would pass his house forgetting where he lived being so deep in thought. You're in good company. You must have allot on your mind.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Living alone I can no longer blame others for things I lose and I can identify with your words here as I hide things and forget where I've hidden them! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Living alone I can no longer blame others for things I lose and I can identify with your words here as I hide things and forget where I've hidden them! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thank you Dolly!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Aah. You must be a poet or author. I recognize the symptoms denoted. I pine for your cure but that may mean leaving the game of writing every day or being sanitized in a sanitorium.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Aah. You must be a poet or author. I recognize the symptoms denoted. I pine for your cure but that may mean leaving the game of writing every day or being sanitized in a sanitorium.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Hahaha
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Hahaha
Comment from Michaela Moore
Oh, my! How many times have I felt like this. Thank you for helping me feel like I'm not alone in this life escapade. And your image fits with this little funny beautifully! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Oh, my! How many times have I felt like this. Thank you for helping me feel like I'm not alone in this life escapade. And your image fits with this little funny beautifully! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thank you! You are not alone!
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Thank you! You are not alone!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This brought a smile to my face. I so often catch myself doing that. The worst is when I come to (frequently), standing in front of the fridge with the door wide open... no idea what I was going to get. Kate xx
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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This brought a smile to my face. I so often catch myself doing that. The worst is when I come to (frequently), standing in front of the fridge with the door wide open... no idea what I was going to get. Kate xx
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Yes!!
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Yes!!
Comment from lancellot
Searching for something
Which I sure wish I could find!
It might be my mind.
This is interesting. I think we've all been there, when short term memory is shorter than we thought.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Searching for something
Which I sure wish I could find!
It might be my mind.
This is interesting. I think we've all been there, when short term memory is shorter than we thought.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Exactly!!
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Exactly!!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
My experience is the same as yours, lol. Taking my head off would probably cause me to lose my mind. I will wear my glasses on my head down to my glasses. Organization is not my strong suit. Since my daughter lives with me, she takes things with her to store them, so I won't forget where they are. This is a great post, thanks for writing and sharing it.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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My experience is the same as yours, lol. Taking my head off would probably cause me to lose my mind. I will wear my glasses on my head down to my glasses. Organization is not my strong suit. Since my daughter lives with me, she takes things with her to store them, so I won't forget where they are. This is a great post, thanks for writing and sharing it.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Haha! Thanks for relating! It?s great to know I?m not alone!
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Yes.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-You are not alone in your dilemma.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good use of humor and a good entry.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-You are not alone in your dilemma.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good use of humor and a good entry.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Thank you!
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good 5-7-5 poem. It is very relatable. The text can be easily seen, but it could be a bit larger. Your message is clear and easily understood. I don't understand how the visual fits. I think you can find a better visual. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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This is a good 5-7-5 poem. It is very relatable. The text can be easily seen, but it could be a bit larger. Your message is clear and easily understood. I don't understand how the visual fits. I think you can find a better visual. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Thank you!
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You are Welcome!
