A Soft Embrace
a 2-5-2 poetic form9 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Melissa,
This is a very nice presentation for this short syllabled poem contest. You captured in few words that dream scene. She visions her dreams. thanks
In this one, you chose to use lowest case letters for all your words (my preferred style).
Mark
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Melissa,
This is a very nice presentation for this short syllabled poem contest. You captured in few words that dream scene. She visions her dreams. thanks
In this one, you chose to use lowest case letters for all your words (my preferred style).
Mark
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Hello Mark. Thanks so much. The short 2-5-2 format is always a challenge!! I also prefer the lower case for the short ones.. it seems to present differently than those with capitalization. Hugs, my friend!
Melissa
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
What a nice thought, being caressed by moonbeams. What more would you need to solicit the most perfect of dreams? The picture works great for this verse as well.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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What a nice thought, being caressed by moonbeams. What more would you need to solicit the most perfect of dreams? The picture works great for this verse as well.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Rena Smith
I like this poem because the words are soft and relaxing. It seems that the writer was trying to convey a sense of peace and calmness. It's like this poem is meant to be a 'Brahm's Lullaby' and will put you to sleep if someone else is reading it to you. I wouldn't change anything about it. I like this poem because it's short and sweet and the words are soothing to the ears.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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I like this poem because the words are soft and relaxing. It seems that the writer was trying to convey a sense of peace and calmness. It's like this poem is meant to be a 'Brahm's Lullaby' and will put you to sleep if someone else is reading it to you. I wouldn't change anything about it. I like this poem because it's short and sweet and the words are soothing to the ears.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
How do you know if moonbeams are caressing if you are comfortably asleep? j.k. This is one of the better ones submitted. Good luck. ....................................
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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How do you know if moonbeams are caressing if you are comfortably asleep? j.k. This is one of the better ones submitted. Good luck. ....................................
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much Tom.
Comment from RodG
You could not have chosen a more appropriate picture to illustrate your poem. Moonbeams definitely put one in the mood to dream, and those described are affectionate. You manage to create the perfect MOOD with your nine syllables. Rod
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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You could not have chosen a more appropriate picture to illustrate your poem. Moonbeams definitely put one in the mood to dream, and those described are affectionate. You manage to create the perfect MOOD with your nine syllables. Rod
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you Rod!!!
Comment from papa55mike
The moon has had much power over our dreams throughout history. What a wonderfully written poem and delightful picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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The moon has had much power over our dreams throughout history. What a wonderfully written poem and delightful picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from jessizero
This poem gave off a soft, gentle and calming vibe. I really enjoyed reading it. The syllable count was perfect, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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This poem gave off a soft, gentle and calming vibe. I really enjoyed reading it. The syllable count was perfect, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Beautifully stated and presented 2-5-2. The text is large and easy to read. The message is clear. The visual fits perfectly. I wish you luck in this contest. You have a good entry,
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Beautifully stated and presented 2-5-2. The text is large and easy to read. The message is clear. The visual fits perfectly. I wish you luck in this contest. You have a good entry,
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A sensuous poem. It portrays the halcyon glow of daydreams. The picture is perfect for the poem. The flow is good. The words are all soft feeling and warm. Very nice. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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A sensuous poem. It portrays the halcyon glow of daydreams. The picture is perfect for the poem. The flow is good. The words are all soft feeling and warm. Very nice. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thank you!!!
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Most welcome.
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You are welcome.
