Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

No (long) in, should be N (longer) in. Other than that, it looks pretty good. It sounds like you were facing some tough spots in your life as well as good times. I think this is a nice thing you are doing for your children. I wish you the best.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022

Thank you for reviewing this and for your comment. I hope it isn't coming off as too negative. My life has always had it's highs and lows I think most peoples lives are mostly that way. I feel I've had full life and one I've enjoyed despite the frustations.
Beth

Comment from K.L. Rockquemore

Excellent

This is a unique piece of writing.

The point of view is creative and inventive.

I appreciate the chapter recap, as I have read a few chapters but it was nice to have that information. I was able to jump in quite easily.

I appreciate the author notes as well. I think what you are doing for your children is wonderful. What a special gift you are giving them.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022

Thank you for the review. I'm pleased that people are willing to tune in on my life. It isn't something that you need to have read the other chapters in order to follow like a novel so I glad you review my chapters whenever you can. I appreciate your comments.
Beth

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job with this chapter, Beth. You packed it full
with lot of info. It seems your children were always up to or
into some kind of dilemma that Mom and Dad rescued them
from. I hoped everything worked out with the chiropractic job,
the 'roommate, and the health of you and hubby. I found it odd
for the doctor to suggest surgery for both knees at age 87. You
had your hands full of everybody' worries, wishes, problems,
plus, your own life to live.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

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 Comment Written 27-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022

Thank you so much Jan. I really appreciate your help with the editing.
Beth

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

I swear your dad has nine lives! No surgery should be done after the age of eighty, so I've read. With all those worries about your children, it's a wonder you didn't suffer from high blood pressure. I enjoy reading their situations, but am glad they are not my reality! Kudos to you, Beth.

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 Comment Written 27-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022

I'm pretty sure my dad would not have tolorate that surgery well but some doctors are willing to take the chance to make the money. My kids created new problem all the time. Thanks for the review. Stay safe.

Beth