My Toddler And Animals
I tried to make it funny.27 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
I loved this funny poem .Most of all I loved the end rhymes of 'oon' The little toddlers adventures were funny and children will love it .Thank you for sharing and all the best.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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I loved this funny poem .Most of all I loved the end rhymes of 'oon' The little toddlers adventures were funny and children will love it .Thank you for sharing and all the best.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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I wish I could put the poem in a picture book
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
You have done a great job with the prompt, very creative!
I appreciate the presentation. The 3D visual is cute and effective at grabbing the readers attention.
The use of rhyme throughout works well without force and creates a bouncy timbre.
Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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You have done a great job with the prompt, very creative!
I appreciate the presentation. The 3D visual is cute and effective at grabbing the readers attention.
The use of rhyme throughout works well without force and creates a bouncy timbre.
Well done.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thanks very much!!! I tried to make readers laugh.
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You were successful.
I love your profile photo:)
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Thanks
Comment from Lulube
lol, yes this is funny and very cute. Not to say there wasn't a serious point to it though when the raccoons were taken by a typhoon. That caught me off guard. Great rhyming and easy flow to read with. good luck in the contest.
lulube
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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lol, yes this is funny and very cute. Not to say there wasn't a serious point to it though when the raccoons were taken by a typhoon. That caught me off guard. Great rhyming and easy flow to read with. good luck in the contest.
lulube
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thanks, contest is over!
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ahhhh, too bad
lulube
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Comment from LJbutterfly
This is an imaginative poem that tells a funny story. It flows smoothly with a continuous end rhyme. You did a great job pairing your picture with the words of your poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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This is an imaginative poem that tells a funny story. It flows smoothly with a continuous end rhyme. You did a great job pairing your picture with the words of your poem. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much!!!;
Comment from paige_a
Hello pookietoo! Your poem was such fun. I'm impressed that you were able to come up with so many words to rhyme with. That is an impressive skill on its own! Very well done, and kudos to you :)
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Hello pookietoo! Your poem was such fun. I'm impressed that you were able to come up with so many words to rhyme with. That is an impressive skill on its own! Very well done, and kudos to you :)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun write with great alliteration, and you made me smile here too. You let your imagination run riot here and it is a great entry for the contes, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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This is a fun write with great alliteration, and you made me smile here too. You let your imagination run riot here and it is a great entry for the contes, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thanks, you should have laughed!
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Call it the British reserve.
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You mean you didn't laugh?
Comment from nomi338
I do believe that very soon, I shall venture beyond the moon. Soon to become a merry cartoon. I will ride on a rocket that just might go boom, or race with a witch while riding a broom. Your poem is like a flower that just decided to bloom.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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I do believe that very soon, I shall venture beyond the moon. Soon to become a merry cartoon. I will ride on a rocket that just might go boom, or race with a witch while riding a broom. Your poem is like a flower that just decided to bloom.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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My poem is like a flower that decided to bloom. I will take that as a compliment
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That was exactly how it was intended.
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Thanks!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Pretty non-sensical!
Well written.
I liked the silly rhyming, which somehow seemed to work.
None of the rhymes felt forced, though at the same time, they all did. lol
Good work.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Pretty non-sensical!
Well written.
I liked the silly rhyming, which somehow seemed to work.
None of the rhymes felt forced, though at the same time, they all did. lol
Good work.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme. Very great imagination. Awesome photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme. Very great imagination. Awesome photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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The contest is over, thanks for the review!
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Your welcome
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Comment from JoannaN
I like the rhymes :) This poem would make a splash among children, because the rhymes are flowing so gracefully. The story is both funny, absurd and nonsense. Good job :)
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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I like the rhymes :) This poem would make a splash among children, because the rhymes are flowing so gracefully. The story is both funny, absurd and nonsense. Good job :)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much!
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You are welcome :)
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