Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

This is a very sad, well-written, but sad story.
You might look up 'projecting'.
You might also look at First Corinthians, chapter 8, verses 9-13.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022

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Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

A nice use of the prompt. The language is blunt and forceful. The use of mask as a personality facade is a bit worn, but is carried off well. The narrative stays on point. We have all been in situations like this the site varies. The flow is good. The final end is appropriate and fairly cheerful.

Thanks for a good read.

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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022

Thanks for your feedback. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

reply by dellsworthpoet on 02-Oct-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is magnificent writing, mystery writer. My goodness, your talent shines in this one. If I were the lone judge, I'd declare this the winner. Exceptional writing! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :))

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 Comment Written 30-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022

Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.