Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol! Now I'm curious if they will find Mr. Toblerone in those muddy waters! But I would think the cars would be sticking out by now in four foot deep waters.

I liked how Waylon joined Miranda's viewpoint of Missy. And Missy had the gall to insult Waylon saying he's not like his handsome father.
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think is this. It (maybe a colon instead of a period?)
Now I know he's going to far. (too)
My granddad younger brother was one of those (granddad's)

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022

Thank you so much for the detailed review. I live for reviews like this. I'm going in to correct the spags. Glad you're liking the story. Gretchen

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Enjoyable continuation of the story, and I enjoyed how you ended it at that point! The sparring between Miranda and Missy is excellent too. Looking forward to more.
Wendy

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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022

Thank you, Wendy for this favorable review. Gretchen

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

You are doing so well with this story. Still a good read. I hope you will keep it coming. Maybe this could be a Miniseries, hehe. One spag. my granddad used to be a bootlegger[s]

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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022

Thank you so much for this fun review and for pointing out the spag. Much appreciated. Gretchen