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The After Party

FanStory members attend the after-dinner gala.

33 total reviews 
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Well I feel like I'm slightly under dressed for this after party. I never thought I was a vain person but I loved seeing my name in the same sentence as Nat King Cole and George Harrison. Stellar follow up and a big thank you for the invite. Gretchen

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
    Gretchen, thank you for the six stars! I got a review from Jay Squires, I think he was jealous you were there, and he wasn't. Thank you for reading. Terry.
reply by GWHARGIS on 04-Oct-2022
    The world of pseudo- celebrity, even in fiction, is cut throat. Watch out Jay, this is the second Fanstory party I've been to. Lol. My pleasure on the rating and review. Some story tellers would have gone the "insert name here" route. But you listened to each of your readers and voila! Fun stuff.
    Gretchen
Comment from nomi338
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I am sure that most of the FanStory members would be most happy to help since you were so gracious as to invite them to the after party and introduce them to some of their favorite celebs. I can tell you that on my way back to my hotel, I could muster over and over again, "Man what a party! Terry really did his thing."

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
    LOL, thank you for the six stars, I am delighted you enjoyed the party. Thank you for reading. Better keep that handshake secret. Terry
reply by nomi338 on 03-Oct-2022
    But of course.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job with your after-party party, Terry.
I enjoyed reading and not just because I got an invite.
Your FS attendees were matched well with their table mates.
I looked at YouTube for some of the celebs and enjoyed their
unique styles. I wonder if you'll need to write a follow-up to
this one from new reviews you may receive. This kind of party
may (should) become an annual event.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Jan, I am delighted you enjoyed the story. Maybe I will think about an annual party. Terry.
Comment from John Ciarmello
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A great piece, Terry. The after-party sounded like more fun than the original gathering. It was a bit unsettling that tom Wiggled in on your date, though, but then again, Marilynn always did have a cheeky vibe.
P.S. I could have helped with the garbage too. Hahahaha! Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
    LOL, thanks for the offer! I vote for you this morning, I hope you win the story of the month, it is a great story. Thank you for reading my story. Terry.
reply by John Ciarmello on 03-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Terry!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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I have given you an extra star because of the special Invite and note regarding yours truly. I found this hilarious and just in case you did not cc: Marilyn I have copied, pasted and forwarded it to her. Sincerely, Tom H

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
    LOL, thank you for the six stars, I am delighted you enjoyed it. I thought with your sense of humor you would have some fun with it. Thank you for reading, Terry.
Comment from lyenochka
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That's so funny, Terry! And why would anyone consider it a faux pas to not include us. You would have a separate party for us, right? And yes, of course, we'd help you clean up, too!

I am always amazed at how many people you got to know so quickly on Fanstory! Your people skills are off the charts!

with Houston Whitney (did you mean Whitney Houston?)

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
    Helen, thank you for the review and reading my story. I thought you might enjoy it. And yes I did correct my dyslexia with Whitney. Terry.
reply by lyenochka on 03-Oct-2022
    You have dyslexia?
    I'm sure everyone enjoyed your fun party! 😊💕
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
    I have some mild form of it, part of the reason I can't spell worth a ding dong darn. But nobody understood that when I was in school so long ago.
reply by lyenochka on 03-Oct-2022
    I think we all have a mild form of something or another that the experts have names for now. I think I have a mild form of Prosopagnosia - I can't remember faces unless I see them regularly. I met with a podiatrist last week and I have no clue what he looked like.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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Hahaha! Thank you for the invitation. I truly enjoyed the after-party, and enjoyed reading about it. I've read the work of all the attending writers, and enjoyed socializing with the entertainers. You really know how to throw a great party. This was really, really fun, imaginative, and well written.

"walking into the main dining room with Houston Whitney." Should that be Whitney Houston?

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
    Thank you for the six stars! It is too bad we didn't get a recording of your song. Thank you for reading my story. And yes I did correct my dyslexia with Whitney. Terry.
reply by LJbutterfly on 03-Oct-2022
    You are welcome. Let me know if you have another party. LJButterfly
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
    Will Do! LOL
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Cool. Well written. Good work.
I'm like Wendy G. and Jannypan, a bit too young to appreciate some of them. (But not too young too appreciate Marilyn.)
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
    LOL, you dirty old man, okay we all got to stand in line on that one! Thank you for reading. Terry.
reply by Wayne Fowler on 03-Oct-2022
    smiley face here
Comment from royowen
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I'm afraid I'll have to give you a six for this one, your an opportunist Terry, you've mixed this up most imaginatively, it must have been a bit of fun, allowing yourself a bit of levity without being too "naughty" would behave been a little difficult, beautifully and imaginatively written my friend, blessings Roy
Typo (Geroge) Harrison. George?

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
    Roy, thank you for the six stars! I hope you noticed I spared no expense in getting there! Thank you for reading and the kind words and finding the typo. Terry.
reply by royowen on 03-Oct-2022
    You outdid yourself Terry,
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very interesting and well put together story about the after party. You used very good descriptive words and very good names and fanstory friends. Thanks for sharing. Teri

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
    Teri, thank you for your very kind comments. Terry.