Dragonfly Dance
A somonka for the Japanese Club Challenge10 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A clever pairing of the dance of the dragonfly and the dance of love, renewed, remembered. Lovely presentation June for this Somonka poem. You are very good with the Japanese forms.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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A clever pairing of the dance of the dragonfly and the dance of love, renewed, remembered. Lovely presentation June for this Somonka poem. You are very good with the Japanese forms.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 07-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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I do enjoy the Japanese forms. Glad you enjoyed the read!
Comment from Sally Law
This is really beautiful poetry and easier for me to see than most. The theme and subject all work together for a stunning presentation. I'd dance away with my love too! Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the challenge,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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This is really beautiful poetry and easier for me to see than most. The theme and subject all work together for a stunning presentation. I'd dance away with my love too! Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the challenge,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insights. I?m glad you enjoyed this romantic piece.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Beautiful lovers somonka
the presentation is impecable
my only suggestion is to use lower case...
NOTES:
"Thoughts (lower case) *thoughts"
"Shall we try .." shall
"Memories" *memories'
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Beautiful lovers somonka
the presentation is impecable
my only suggestion is to use lower case...
NOTES:
"Thoughts (lower case) *thoughts"
"Shall we try .." shall
"Memories" *memories'
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Yes I will revise accordingly. Thanks for the positive feedback.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written somonka poem you have penned for the club. I love to watch dragonflies. Their wings are so dainty looking. You used great descriptive words. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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This is a very well written somonka poem you have penned for the club. I love to watch dragonflies. Their wings are so dainty looking. You used great descriptive words. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insights. I am happy you enjoyed this romantic interlude.
Comment from BethShelby
Nicely done. I like the way you compair the movements of the dragonflies to a dance. The idea that it reminds you of a dance you and your love once did in the evening around the pond. It is something you long to repeat.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Nicely done. I like the way you compair the movements of the dragonflies to a dance. The idea that it reminds you of a dance you and your love once did in the evening around the pond. It is something you long to repeat.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insights. I?m glad you enjoyed this romantic interlude.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Thinking of these dragonflies and damsels tangoing across the pond made me smile June and their dancing is delightful and industrious too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thinking of these dragonflies and damsels tangoing across the pond made me smile June and their dancing is delightful and industrious too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insights. I?m happy you enjoyed this romantic interlude.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
You tried to entice your husband to dance with you using the dragonfly mating dance to remind him your romance in the past. It's very clever. I think we all need to rekindle our love in long marriages.
Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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You tried to entice your husband to dance with you using the dragonfly mating dance to remind him your romance in the past. It's very clever. I think we all need to rekindle our love in long marriages.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insights. I?m glad you enjoyed this interlude pictured by the dragonfly dance.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
The poem is beautifully stated. The message is clear. The visual fits well. I wish the text was a bit larger for easier reading. This is a good club entry. Good luck in the club contest.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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The poem is beautifully stated. The message is clear. The visual fits well. I wish the text was a bit larger for easier reading. This is a good club entry. Good luck in the club contest.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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I?m glad you enjoyed this piece. I appreciate the positive feedback and have revised the font. It should be easier to read.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello June. I enjoyed reading the Somonka that you penned. I like the form and think you are very clever to address all of the different points in such a splendid way. Well done, as always!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Hello June. I enjoyed reading the Somonka that you penned. I like the form and think you are very clever to address all of the different points in such a splendid way. Well done, as always!!
Melissa
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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I?m happy you enjoyed this somonka! Thanks for dropping by to share your insights, I always appreciate your feedback.
Comment from Dr. Von
This is beautifully written work. The Somonka poem meets the requirements. I like the words you chose to express the romance contained in the poem and in the artwork. This is well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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This is beautifully written work. The Somonka poem meets the requirements. I like the words you chose to express the romance contained in the poem and in the artwork. This is well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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I?m happy you enjoyed this somonka! Thanks for dropping by to share your insights, I always appreciate your feedback.
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You are welcome.
