Seekers of the gift
A poem15 total reviews
Comment from Brett Matthew West
In next to last line "your" should be you're.
Well crafted poem that asks which side of the coin one is on. Does one appreciate "the gift" (of eternal salvation) or "the reason for the rift" (the fall of creation)?
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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In next to last line "your" should be you're.
Well crafted poem that asks which side of the coin one is on. Does one appreciate "the gift" (of eternal salvation) or "the reason for the rift" (the fall of creation)?
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Thank you Brett, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Teri7
Roy, This is a very well written six-star poem you have penned in my eyes. You used very good descriptive words and very good scripture from Romans. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Roy, This is a very well written six-star poem you have penned in my eyes. You used very good descriptive words and very good scripture from Romans. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Thank you Teri, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from scongrove
Great writing, my friend :) I'm really enjoying all your posts this morning. Although they are different, they always have great meaning to them.
The first paragraph caught my eye:
Do we appreciate the gift,
or the reason for the rift?
Does creation bring the wonder,
or the one who brings the thunder.
Your talent goes beyond all the others.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Great writing, my friend :) I'm really enjoying all your posts this morning. Although they are different, they always have great meaning to them.
The first paragraph caught my eye:
Do we appreciate the gift,
or the reason for the rift?
Does creation bring the wonder,
or the one who brings the thunder.
Your talent goes beyond all the others.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much dear Shana,
Comment from Sugarray77
A wonderful poem full of faith and your love for the Lord. Excellent rhyme choices in an AABB format. Lovely quatrains, Roy. Well done and I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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A wonderful poem full of faith and your love for the Lord. Excellent rhyme choices in an AABB format. Lovely quatrains, Roy. Well done and I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
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Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Melissa,, for these wonderful comments and empathetic review, blessings Roy
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem is to remind us that all we are, see and have are gifts from God.
We do sometimes doubt, but in the end hope does come with each new day.
Keep writing and say healthy
Joan
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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This poem is to remind us that all we are, see and have are gifts from God.
We do sometimes doubt, but in the end hope does come with each new day.
Keep writing and say healthy
Joan
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Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Joan, for these wonderful comments and empathetic review, blessings Roy
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Don?t mention it, Roy.
Joan
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You are most kindly welcome, Roy.
Joan
