Enigmas
Inspired by Omega Alive by Epica41 total reviews
Comment from Michaela Moore
Each of your poems are a carefully crafted work of art all their own. I love this. Before I read your note at the bottom, your image made me thing of music as I read. The structure of your poem made me think of the construction of song lyrics with your mid stanza being the chorus. As always, I had to read your poem three times for my brain to envelope all the wonderous meaning and beauty within. The first read I simply revel in your diction, your opulent vocabulary. I just let those words and alliterations and internal rhymes flow through me and taste their delicacies upon my tongue. The second reading I slow way down and try and dig for your meaning. What is it you are saying in this kaleidoscope of expression. Then with the 3rd reading, knowing the meaning, I let your imagery take me to new heights of glory in the written word. You are an egnima of writing that I happily perambulate your acid tricks with the building bricks you make yourself before you build the most extraordinary bliss.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Each of your poems are a carefully crafted work of art all their own. I love this. Before I read your note at the bottom, your image made me thing of music as I read. The structure of your poem made me think of the construction of song lyrics with your mid stanza being the chorus. As always, I had to read your poem three times for my brain to envelope all the wonderous meaning and beauty within. The first read I simply revel in your diction, your opulent vocabulary. I just let those words and alliterations and internal rhymes flow through me and taste their delicacies upon my tongue. The second reading I slow way down and try and dig for your meaning. What is it you are saying in this kaleidoscope of expression. Then with the 3rd reading, knowing the meaning, I let your imagery take me to new heights of glory in the written word. You are an egnima of writing that I happily perambulate your acid tricks with the building bricks you make yourself before you build the most extraordinary bliss.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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You have a knack for making me feel good with you reviews and then I worry about responding, lol. Thank you so much for your words - they are unbelievably encouraging :-).
Mike
PS I haven't forgotten about your first chapter and will get there shortly. I was thrilled to see it place in book of the month though - huge congrats :-)
Comment from MissMerri
I'm fresh out of sixes, but so impressed with your poem, rhymed and so musical and yet so original and creative. I have never seen another poem quite like this one. You are obviously as at home in the world of poetry as you are in the realm of storytelling. This was a true treat to read, as well as inspiring. MM
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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I'm fresh out of sixes, but so impressed with your poem, rhymed and so musical and yet so original and creative. I have never seen another poem quite like this one. You are obviously as at home in the world of poetry as you are in the realm of storytelling. This was a true treat to read, as well as inspiring. MM
Comment Written 08-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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Thank you :-). I enjoy using 'time changes' in poetry to alter the pace and mix up the rhythm a bit. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Mike
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem was well presented in color scheme, image, word choices,
and message, Mike. One's imagination can take him/her anywhere
to discover the undiscovered or make sense of what s/he already
knows. Too many are closed minded to think/try new things. Your
video was an interesting addition. You gave readers much to think
about which was great.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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Your poem was well presented in color scheme, image, word choices,
and message, Mike. One's imagination can take him/her anywhere
to discover the undiscovered or make sense of what s/he already
knows. Too many are closed minded to think/try new things. Your
video was an interesting addition. You gave readers much to think
about which was great.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 07-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Jan :-). Indeed, imagination is the basis of truth, I thing, because we only discover new things when we take ourselves outside the usual way of thinking.
Mike
Comment from Sanku
This is an interesting and thought provoking post.The arrangement of line and use of alliterations .Imagination can help us us to unlock the enigmas ,but i am afraid I may get 2 plus 2 five!
Interesting music
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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This is an interesting and thought provoking post.The arrangement of line and use of alliterations .Imagination can help us us to unlock the enigmas ,but i am afraid I may get 2 plus 2 five!
Interesting music
Comment Written 07-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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The core is what it's all about - the role of kmagination in understanding and solving mysteries :-)
Mike
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem simple and informative, as well truly truthful to read in orderly term of enigmas for identification and explanation; I like the flow of thoughts and rhymes; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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This poem simple and informative, as well truly truthful to read in orderly term of enigmas for identification and explanation; I like the flow of thoughts and rhymes; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much for this lovely review :-).
Mike
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Not only is Epica's video a big production, so is this submission you released today. Well done. .................................................................................................
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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Not only is Epica's video a big production, so is this submission you released today. Well done. .................................................................................................
Comment Written 07-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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Thanks, Tom. Their music inspired me to try for a bombastic poem :-)
Mike
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I enjoyed your poem and the music (at least for a little while). It is certainly unique but goes very well with the theme of your poem. You seem to have a very wide range of literary writing.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed your poem and the music (at least for a little while). It is certainly unique but goes very well with the theme of your poem. You seem to have a very wide range of literary writing.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Carol :-). I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
Mike
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Interesting poem with exceptional presentation and imagery. The font and formatting is easy to read. Creativity is divine and art expression is healthy. Well done!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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Interesting poem with exceptional presentation and imagery. The font and formatting is easy to read. Creativity is divine and art expression is healthy. Well done!
Gypsy
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Gypsy - I'm so glad you liked it :-)
Mike
Comment from heavenempress
So much attractive piece of work. Well arranged material. Educative too and new words 'Perambulation' very new word. Keep it up? Will highly recommend your work to others
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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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So much attractive piece of work. Well arranged material. Educative too and new words 'Perambulation' very new word. Keep it up? Will highly recommend your work to others
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your lovely words - I'm really glad you enjoyed the poem :-). Can I just check - was the 4 star rating intentional? It's totally fine if it was - I'm only checking because your words were all positive.
Either way, thanks so much for reading!
Mike
Comment from Ulla
Hi Mike,. I liked this poem a lot. It's inspiring and gives me a lot to think about. You video is inspiring. I really enjoyed watching. It emphasized every word in your poem. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Hi Mike,. I liked this poem a lot. It's inspiring and gives me a lot to think about. You video is inspiring. I really enjoyed watching. It emphasized every word in your poem. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Tha k you, Ulla :-). They are a great band and definitely helped me start writing again after a few weeks of work taking over.
Mike
