An Affair to Remember
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I think, if I racked my brain I could work out your identity mystery writer, as I have already seen a photo of that couple on their wedding day. But where and in what context? The aim here not being to reveal, I'll refrain from searching further, and just try and get my head around the little knot posed by the second frat brother - very intriguing writing style. Kate xx
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
I think, if I racked my brain I could work out your identity mystery writer, as I have already seen a photo of that couple on their wedding day. But where and in what context? The aim here not being to reveal, I'll refrain from searching further, and just try and get my head around the little knot posed by the second frat brother - very intriguing writing style. Kate xx
Comment Written 08-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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Completely true story. Both of those brothers from different mothers were idiots, especially the second, because he not only missed a fine date, but did not get to participate in his receiving his commission in the U.S. Army that night at the military ball.
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful story of your love. We too were married in June 1979. Love the photo, showing the tenderness of your love. Your poem is well written - best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
Beautiful story of your love. We too were married in June 1979. Love the photo, showing the tenderness of your love. Your poem is well written - best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thanks friend
Comment from Regina Elliott
A very loving and charming
poem. You've penned this
write so beautifully. It's
lovely to read of a dedicated
and faithful marriage. My
best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
A very loving and charming
poem. You've penned this
write so beautifully. It's
lovely to read of a dedicated
and faithful marriage. My
best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank you. Love still shines in our eyes but has been toned down by Greenpeace, to a more conserved illumination. :-)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I was trying to follow along with your words in your poem. But I came to the conclusion that you were in love with this woman; probably infatuated beyond words. You ended up marrying her.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
I was trying to follow along with your words in your poem. But I came to the conclusion that you were in love with this woman; probably infatuated beyond words. You ended up marrying her.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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I was, I am and yes, we did more than four decades ago.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Though it is not an easy said love story, somehow I got the order of the thoughts flown and the reasons are good to appreciate for appreciation and evaluation; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
Though it is not an easy said love story, somehow I got the order of the thoughts flown and the reasons are good to appreciate for appreciation and evaluation; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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and I do and will.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Lovely story. I felt like this was a short story more than a poem. I really liked it. I always wonder if finding the "right one" is luck or fate.
Keep up the wonderful work!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
Lovely story. I felt like this was a short story more than a poem. I really liked it. I always wonder if finding the "right one" is luck or fate.
Keep up the wonderful work!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Fate, followed with multiple pieces of luck, for sure for me.
Comment from royowen
What a lovely story. The idea of being smitten by a girl of great Beauty, certainly happened to me, but God had other plans for me, and that certainly happened, but it's always better to be guided rather than fantasise and choose for oneself. Life can take a turn for the better, and I'm so glad it worked out for you. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
What a lovely story. The idea of being smitten by a girl of great Beauty, certainly happened to me, but God had other plans for me, and that certainly happened, but it's always better to be guided rather than fantasise and choose for oneself. Life can take a turn for the better, and I'm so glad it worked out for you. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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A Beautiful Life without the mind for math. Still, it wasn't so easy waiting 2 and a half years.
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That?s right