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Traffic Jam

2nd Place Finish.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Abilene Riley
Excellent
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Ha! What a clever and endearing use of the rhyme. The reader fills in the last line as expected. Great execution on that. Funny and sharp little poem.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
    Thanks! Made we laugh out loud myself!
Comment from jessizero
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

LOL!!! Your poem honestly made me laugh aloud. I didn't pretend not to "get" the rhyme. Should I feel bad about that? Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
    It made me laugh out loud too! Genius? must think alike! Appreciate you and your kind words!!!