Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

I enjoyed the way you used rhyme in your poem, and especially liked the line:
The good things in my life all came from your love,
Very nicely done. Kate xx

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022

Thank you for this great review. :)

Comment from Liz Westfall

Excellent

Aww. This was such a sweet and romantic piece. What you have written is so true about love. The power and nature of love. I wish you luck in the contest! Great job.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022

Thank you for this thoughtful review, have a nice evening. :)

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Everything written herein stands true most of the time. I expect there are differences but not with me. Marrying the girl I pursued, who set all the rules, taught me patience, and sacrifice, and a greater love for God.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022

Thanks for reading my poem and for sharing your thoughts with me. :)

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

How lovely this is, mystery poet. My husband and I started dating in 1972 and married in 1975. How sweet your story and appreciation of the one you love. That's really the key to success. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :))

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022

Thanks for this great review, it's always appreciated. :)

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

This is well structured and has that lasting love tone that is popular with married folk in their later years. Great idea. This will win I'm sure of it.

notes:

I {loved} you for who you were, for who you'd be,

-love. Make present tense like the rest of the poem.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022

Thank you for this nice review and your helpful suggestion. :)