Remembering Yesterday
Viewing comments for Chapter 169 "The Beginning of Another Year"A widow's journey into her relationship with her
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Comment from royowen
I agree that it's good that we can't see into the future Beth, otherwise we could possibly get discouraged. Jesus was so right, we get by somehow, getting and education in provision, I know about parental duties. Beautifully written Beth. Blessings Roy
Typo : Said she could (to) cash in her car.
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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I agree that it's good that we can't see into the future Beth, otherwise we could possibly get discouraged. Jesus was so right, we get by somehow, getting and education in provision, I know about parental duties. Beautifully written Beth. Blessings Roy
Typo : Said she could (to) cash in her car.
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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Thank you Roy. I don't know how that extra "to" got in there. Barbara pointed it out as well. I enjoyed you comments.
Beth
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Most welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this memoir with us. I really like these stories.
Kimberly said she could to cash in her 401K in March and pay us back if we would loan them more. (It doesn't make sense, maybe omit 'to')
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Thank you for sharing this memoir with us. I really like these stories.
Kimberly said she could to cash in her 401K in March and pay us back if we would loan them more. (It doesn't make sense, maybe omit 'to')
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the review. I have no idea how the "to" extra two got in there but I'm glad you saw it. I've taken it out.
Beth
