Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Heather Knight
Gorgeous poem. I love the rhythm.
Personally I love autumn, but your metaphors are very apt.
What I can't stand is summer in Madrid. Too hot for me.
Thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Gorgeous poem. I love the rhythm.
Personally I love autumn, but your metaphors are very apt.
What I can't stand is summer in Madrid. Too hot for me.
Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Heather, I am so grateful for the four seasons and I thrive in our long autumn season where we rarely see freezing temperatures. I would not enjoy the summers of Madrid either? too hot.
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That's why we try to escape to England whenever we can. But this summer it was hot even there.
Comment from Liz Westfall
FanStory has introduced me to so many new forms of poetry, including the zanze. This was well-written and full of autumnal imagery. Good luck in your event!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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FanStory has introduced me to so many new forms of poetry, including the zanze. This was well-written and full of autumnal imagery. Good luck in your event!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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I am glad you have discovered FanStory.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This style or poetry appears to be very challenging!. You have done an excellent job, conveying a powerful message about fall--both the season and a time of life--which I am experiencing!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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This style or poetry appears to be very challenging!. You have done an excellent job, conveying a powerful message about fall--both the season and a time of life--which I am experiencing!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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thank you!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I am feeling a little guilty. Autumn is my favorite time of year because the weather is cooler and the beautiful rich tree colors. Sorry.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I am feeling a little guilty. Autumn is my favorite time of year because the weather is cooler and the beautiful rich tree colors. Sorry.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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No regrets Barbara, I relish that we have the seasons!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I commend you for taking on the challenge of a xanze, which I myself would not do for I have other things to do than try to digest for another's sake something other would do better anyway. You're proof.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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I commend you for taking on the challenge of a xanze, which I myself would not do for I have other things to do than try to digest for another's sake something other would do better anyway. You're proof.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Hi Tom, thanks for the nod of validation, having been away for a month I jumped back into the deep pool of wordsmithing.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi JLR,
This is a well done Zanze for the potlatch club. It shows the aging of the body through the changing and falling leaves. I also reminds us what an aging body goes through.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Hi JLR,
This is a well done Zanze for the potlatch club. It shows the aging of the body through the changing and falling leaves. I also reminds us what an aging body goes through.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Hi Joan, thanks!
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No problem.
Joan
Comment from Wendy G
This is a hard form to master but you have completed requirements well. I like the parallel between the seasons of man's life and the arrival of fall. The title is plural (so no apostrophe, which would indicate possession). Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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This is a hard form to master but you have completed requirements well. I like the parallel between the seasons of man's life and the arrival of fall. The title is plural (so no apostrophe, which would indicate possession). Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Hi Wendy, yikes.. and Thanks!
Comment from zanya
Not familiar with the Zanze format but this is a beautiful reflection on the arrival of Autumn and the change of seasons -both Nature and humans feel the impact of the seasonal shift
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Not familiar with the Zanze format but this is a beautiful reflection on the arrival of Autumn and the change of seasons -both Nature and humans feel the impact of the seasonal shift
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Smiles are bubbling and thanks back to you for making this happening.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That chilling wind and biting frost certainly does penetrate the bones and makes us ache and I so agree with you, the forthcoming winter months always seems to take its toll on us, I can identify with your words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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That chilling wind and biting frost certainly does penetrate the bones and makes us ache and I so agree with you, the forthcoming winter months always seems to take its toll on us, I can identify with your words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
It seems that I learn a new poetry form nearly daily in this forum. This is my first introduction to zanze (or is it zantze?). The requirements and restrictions of this format make it incredibly challenging. I salute you for being able to capture imagery and depth under such constraint. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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It seems that I learn a new poetry form nearly daily in this forum. This is my first introduction to zanze (or is it zantze?). The requirements and restrictions of this format make it incredibly challenging. I salute you for being able to capture imagery and depth under such constraint. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank so you very much Charles! This site presents each of us new discoveries ongoing. Welcome!
